Talk:Hair straightening

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Will or Won't?

"Hair straighteners won't damage hair unless used with protective thermal spray" or should it be hair straighteners will damage hair unless used with protective spray?

please clarify

16:27, 18 October 2008 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.164.52.246 (talk)

?

"Nevertheless, many African-American women still continue to straighten their hair claiming it is an aesthetic choice, however, many African American women do continue to straighten their hair due to the fact that they feel, because of interlized opperession and the idea that their natural hair is wrong, or "nappy-looking" straighten their hair to fit as best as possible European women's hair, as said in the 2009 movie, Good Hair" directed by Chris Rock."

What kind of sentence is that? I don't even know how to begin to fix it.

71.68.13.2 (talk) 22:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]