Talk:Devita Saraf

i have give References for most of the articles and This article appears to be written like an advertisement what should i do for this Shravanshetty502 (talk) 16:21, 21 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Gyaantech (talk) 11:24, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Which article? Electric Catfish 15:19, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

ElectricCatfish - this article

This article needs a lot more references, and needs to be written from a neutral point of view. Mdann52 (talk) 15:34, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I had given references in regards to Interest and Hobbies, the notable being the Asia Wall Street Journal, why was that deleted.

for this page. Please also tell me how can i remove the above notifications/warning.thanks. Cyberhawk 5 (talk) 08:56, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Please don't remove the warnings without fixing the problems that were in the warnings. Floating Boat (the editor formerly known as AndieM) 11:06, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The state of the article

Please, to the main contributor: This article reads like an advert. Statements like "..has adeptly steered Vu Technologies to claim its place at the fore-front .." are very unencyclopedic. Please, just stick to the facts, and write from the point of view of an arch rival. Also, the punctuation is either missing or in the wrong spot in many instances. Please put references after punctuation. Also, please ensure that there is a space after a full stop, before the next sentence. Thank you. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 09:58, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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I have given Reference for all the statements. for some statements i don't have online reference so how can i upload a PFD file. Now the page is as per Wikipedia guidance. Please remove this {{multiple issues}} from Devita Saraf wiki page. Shravanshetty502 (talk) 05:43, 24 July 2012 (UTC) [reply]

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Hi, I have made some changes in accordance to the feedback given , added more references and streamlined the content as per encyclopedia format. What further can i do. Cyberhawk 5 (talk) 09:20, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, Cyberhawk,your edit history shows you have not edited this article at all.[1] As other have explained, the Wikipedia article need to be factual balanced articles using reliable independent sources. While it no longer looks like a resume, this article still looks like it exists to promote Ms. Saraf and seems to depend mostly on press releases. You need to show substantive interviews or other coverage in independent sources. Edward321 (talk) 13:12, 27 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Cyberhawk and Shravanshetty, a couple of things

You do not have to post a Helpme request every time you have a question.
Please post new posts at the bottom of the talkpage so the posts will be in order from top to bottom, the oldest at the top the youngest at the bottom.
Please put your signature at the end of your posts, not the beginning.

Thanks, Shearonink (talk) 22:39, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes from next time we will not out the help tagShearonink. But you did not replied our query so please help.

Hi, I have made some changes in accordance to the feedback given , added more references and streamlined the content as per encyclopedia format. What further can i do to remove the above message Shravanshetty502 (talk) 05:16, 25 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

How to remove the above warnings

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I have given enough references and validations from Devita Saraf page, however the warnings dont seem to go. Please reply how to remove it

I have edited the article to remove promotional tone and present the article as appropriate for an encyclopedia. I have also removed references that were either press releases or self-published. If you have questions, please feel free to contact me. Please do not add anymore "help request" templates to the discussion page. Just talk. Other editors are watching this page and will be able to respond directly, without the need for alerting the entire community. Hope this helps. Best regards, Cindy(talk to me) 11:26, 28 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot Cindy for doing the necessary.

Vu Telepresence

Just wanted to inform that Devita Saraf is also the co-founder of Vu Telepresence http://www.marketwatch.com/story/vu-telepresence-announces-multi-party-multi-vendor-video-service-through-vidtel-2012-05-08 http://www.channelprosmb.com/article/29749/Vu-TelePresence-Offers-New-SMB-Conferencing-Capabilities-via-Vidtel/ Cyberhawk 5 (talk) 08:53, 31 July 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cyberhawk 5 (talk • contribs) 09:26, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Mensa Certificate

I have give the Reference from the top Newspapers of India for Mensa Certificate of Devita Saraf.User:Edward321 Shravanshetty502 (talk) 06:45, 7 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]