Talk:Zamor (artist)
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Re-write
The language in the article is a mess, needs to be re-written, possibly from scratch. I had a go at fixing a bit, but not knowing what it's meant to say it's quite difficult. Яehevkor ✉ 10:30, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
- It's very strange your reaction! This article has more than two years in Wikipedia, and a lot of visits, and nobody has said a world about that mess!!!
--Virg38 (talk) 16:28, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
- Maybe no one tried to read it until now.. Яehevkor ✉ 19:19, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
Like you erase the stats... there was almost 1000 visits by month!!!!! --Virg38 (talk) 02:24, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
- I didn't erase any stats. I don't think anyone can do that. Яehevkor ✉ 22:42, 4 January 2013 (UTC)
To clarify some of the issues with the article. The wording of the article is not only simply bad, but it's not neutral, it's written as if to promote the artist, rather than simply inform. As for the conflict of interest notice, the creator of the article was User:Soizik, this name indicates they are perhaps the spouse of the article subject, or at the very least someone with a close connection, this only exacerbates the above neutrality issue. As for re-writting the article, it looks like it was machine translated (a copy paste of the French article?), or translated by someone who doesn't speak English very well at all, a lot of it simply doesn't make sense, making fixing it extremely difficult for someone unfamiliar with the subject. All these are pretty major issues, and can't simply be ignored. The article may have existed for 2 years but this doesn't cancel out the issues that exist now. Яehevkor ✉ 22:54, 4 January 2013 (UTC)