Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Damon Hill
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A notbale amount of work hs gone into this article. I feel certain that I have done just about enough to make this an FA, because the article easily met the GA standards. Although I'm more then happy to make more edits to the article if you suggest any, that are reasonable and worthwhile :)... --Skully Collins 08:59, 23 June 2006 (UTC)
- Support I feel this is a good article... --Skully Collins 10:45, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
Object I find the extensive large quote sections and there big oversized quote marks distracting. Rlevse 17:07, 23 June 2006 (UTC)
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- Minor object Good article, but a few small issues. Jeronimo 06:15, 24 June 2006 (UTC)
The earlier mentioned quotes should probably go to Wikiquote.
- Done, but I'm keeping the 1996 and the 1999 quotes as they are the highlight quotes, if you like, of his career --Skully Collins 10:11, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
- If you moved the quotes to Wikiquote, you should put a link to it (like with the Commons link at the bottom), so people can find it. As for the remaining quotes, I still think they should go. They don't add a lot, and are far from neutral (which wouldn't be an issue if they were used to illustrate a discussion or so). Jeronimo 21:13, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
You may want to mention the fact that Hill raced two seasons with car number 0, being one of only two drivers to use that number (Jody Scheckter being the other one).
The key to the table in the bottom should be included (could be placed to the right of the table), making an extra click unnecessary.
- Done, Cheers :) --Skully Collins 10:03, 26 June 2006 (UTC)