Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Backlog elimination drives/January 2015

Starting Article Number?

The starting article number is shown in the progress chart as 2198, but clicking on All Articles shows the category at 2171. A difference of 27 is hard to understand. I changed Gulrej Khan King to be {{GOCEreviewed |user=Dthomsen8|date=January2015|issues=awaiting deletion decision}}, but that only is one, not 27.--DThomsen8 (talk) 19:49, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I think the count is always based on the number in the box. I see that there are in fact 27 fewer articles when I click on the link. I have no clue what causes the discrepancy. Tdslk (talk) 20:17, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The count in the Progress Chart is updated manually, usually by one of the coordinators (but feel free to do it yourself, if you see how it's done). This update needs to be done daily at 00:00 UTC. I'm not worried about the 27-article difference; it is likely due to the 30-hour difference between the time you saw 2,171 and the time when the Progress Chart was updated. – Jonesey95 (talk) 16:21, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

(Actually, I think it's something other than the time lag. When I look at the main page currently, the "All articles" count in the big box is 2,189. But when I click on all articles, the text says "The following 200 pages are in this category, out of 2,163 total." Which is a weird little discrepancy.) Tdslk (talk) 18:42, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The latter count is just wrong (out of date) in most categories that have over 200 articles in them, and that count can stay wrong for months at a time. If you start at the top of the category and click through page by page, counting up by 200 at a time, you will find that you get within one or two of 2,189. I believe the count in the big box (after clicking refresh). – Jonesey95 (talk) 19:13, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Can I count this article on my list?

I'm currently working on One World Trade Center. Although I started copy editing the article before the drive started, I'm still working on it. Can I count this, or can I only count those that I started working on during the drive? --Biblioworm 21:32, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Do a good job, I will do a review, and then go ahead and count it, unless someone else objects.--DThomsen8 (talk) 03:32, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I'm relatively new to this, so I'm still learning... --Biblioworm 03:51, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Or, perhaps I should just count from the section that I was editing when the drive began, which was the "Opening and post-opening" section. According to the prose counter, there were 5,008 words from that section to the bottom of the article. --Biblioworm 16:03, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Possible quality issue with Dungeons & Dragons: Dragonshard

RaptorexGaming recently listed Dungeons & Dragons: Dragonshard on his "completed" list. I'm a little concerned that the job might not be as complete as it really should be; only a single comma was removed. I'd appreciate outside opinions from my fellow coordinators and other more experienced copy editors. (I said that I was going to do QC work in the elections, so expect this.) --Biblioworm 01:00, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for doing some QC; it is needed. I made some specific suggestions. We have found that simply marking an article as

Not done can be discouraging to new editors, so I try to give helpful, specific examples of further things to look for in the article.

FWIW, we have also found that a simple

suffices when an article has been substantially improved and/or when only tiny copy editing needs remain. Further commentary, even when meant in good faith, has been misinterpreted. – Jonesey95 (talk) 03:19, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I just read through it quickly, and I didn't see any glaring errors. It might be an article that got marked for copy-editing that didn't really need it. I actually wouldn't have taken that final serial comma out, believing, as I do, in commas, lots of them. Dhtwiki (talk) 03:26, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for pointing this out, I meant to put it in working instead of completed, I am still editing it. Thanks for the advice and help. RaptorexGaming (talk) 12:26, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Dodona's Grove

After putting some effort into Dodona's Grove, I believe that what is needed is not so much copyediting as rewriting and references. I have tagged it as needing an expert in English literature, and unless someone says otherwise, I am not taking credit in the January drive.--DThomsen8 (talk) 02:38, 8 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I might take it up after I finish my current article. I've already corrected a couple of things. It reads as though it was written by an expert (or someone who's been overlaying post-Elizabethan literature with a lot of jargon, too much of it slightly off: "at thropomorphs", "raison d'entre", "learnéd"). Dhtwiki (talk) 04:37, 8 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Colross

This seems to be pretty well written already. What have I missed? JacobiJonesJr (talk) 00:33, 10 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You definitely made some improvements already. My suggestions, some of which are judgment calls:

"began constructing the mansion 1799–1800" strikes me as awkward.
I think the lead section is too long, but I haven't read the guideline lately; I would remove some of the history details from the lead.
This sentence is backwards: "The excavation of the Colross site resulted in 79 condominium buyers walking away from their purchase agreements, due to the delay in construction of the luxury Monarch Condominium project."
Inconsistent use of curly quotes and straight quotes.
"Fairfax County, Virginia " needs a comma at the end. See the second bullet at MOS:COMMA.
"famous 'bounty jumper'" looks better like this: "famous 'bounty jumper' "
Remove commas from "activist, Alice Cook (1903–1998),"
"those nearby Abingdon" does not make sense. A word is missing, I think.

That's what I see from a scan of the first half of the article. – Jonesey95 (talk) 01:06, 10 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

University of California Davis Graduate Studies

I started editing this article but found apparent inconsistencies in text that I wasn't able to resolve. So I checked the Talk page and found there was a Merger proposal and some discussion of the accuracy and sourcing of the information provided in the article. Merger proposal

The article itself is only 281 words.

An example of the confusing text in this article is:

"The UC Davis graduate division has a long history in the California system, particularly at the Berkeley, Davis, and San Francisco campuses."

How can the UC Davis graduate division have a long history at the Berkeley and San Francisco campuses?

"This longstanding academic tradition began in the fall of 1925, when 12 students received graduate degrees from the College of Agriculture through a partnership with the Graduate Division at University of Berkeley [sic].[3][4] Over the years, the UC system's inter-campus graduate group programs continued to grow, interact, and collaborate. The first graduate degrees were awarded from the UC Davis campus in June 1949.[5]"

If 12 students received graduate degrees from the College of Agriculture in 1925, how could the first graduate degrees from the UC Davis campus have been awarded in 1949? The relationship between the College of Agriculture and the UC Davis campus isn't clear. ˘ | ˘ Hwajae^{talk • contribs} 06:54, 12 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]