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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): MaxGlasser53 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: KateSheila.
I went through and fixed a few minor grammatical errors, nothing too glaring. I also tried to add a few links in so that it would be linked to other wiki pages. I'd suggest trying to find out a bit more about his personal life, at least his kids names. I'd also add a picture of him to your box of basic info. Other then that I think you did a good job of explaining his career. -KateSheila
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): MaxGlasser53 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: KateSheila.
I went through and fixed a few minor grammatical errors, nothing too glaring. I also tried to add a few links in so that it would be linked to other wiki pages. I'd suggest trying to find out a bit more about his personal life, at least his kids names. I'd also add a picture of him to your box of basic info. Other then that I think you did a good job of explaining his career. -KateSheila