User talk:Radom event gen

Your submission at Articles for creation: Surfing the Healthcare Tsunami: Bring Your Best Board (November 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission's references do not adequately evidence the subject's notability—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
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DGG ( talk ) 20:26, 23 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Surfing the Healthcare Tsunami: Bring Your Best Board concern

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Your draft article, Draft:Surfing the Healthcare Tsunami: Bring Your Best Board

Hello, Radom event gen. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Surfing the Healthcare Tsunami: Bring Your Best Board".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 14:39, 9 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Surfing the Healthcare Tsunami: Bring Your Best Board (February 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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DGG ( talk ) 21:16, 17 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Article creation

On first glance, it appears that the article should be re-written in the film documentary style. The Infobox is fine, but the theme section can be re=written as the "plot" and the content section as the "production". The tone of the article can be addressed as well, making it more neutral and identifying and using more traditional reference sources, such as books on the topic. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 18:51, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Specifics?

Thank you for the advice, FWiW Bzuk. I'm still concerned about the "neutral voice" issue. All the statements in the article are facts and not subjective opinions or value judgments about the content of the film. It could be my lack of Wikipedia experience, but I might not see what you see. Could you be more specific? Again, thank you. Radom event gen (talk) 21:49, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Some simple things, make your intro "lede" much shorter, providing only basic information, title, director, topic and date of broadcast; perhaps the General Electric and donor connection. Start a plot or content section that, again, is much more succinct, only giving a brief overview of the main incidents covered in the story- accidental dosage, misdiagnosis, etc. Create a production section, who was interviewed, what, when, where, why, how (the usual 5 Ws). Conclude with a release/reception/broadcast section. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 05:14, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Surfing the Healthcare Tsunami: Bring Your Best Board

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. —MRD2014 (Happy Thanksgiving!) 16:34, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Jeffrey Wertkin for deletion

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Conflict of interest in Wikipedia

Hi Radom event gen. I work on conflict of interest issues here in Wikipedia, along with my regular editing. Your edits to date all related to the business of CareFusion. I'm giving you notice of our Conflict of Interest guideline and Terms of Use, and will have some comments and requests for you below.

Hello, Radom event gen. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places, or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic, and it is important when editing Wikipedia articles that such connections be completely transparent. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, we ask that you please:

avoid editing or creating articles related to you and your family, friends, school, company, club, or organization, as well as any competing companies' projects or products;
instead, you are encouraged to propose changes on the Talk pages of affected article(s) (see the {{request edit}} template);
when discussing affected articles, disclose your COI (see WP:DISCLOSE);
avoid linking to the Wikipedia article or to the website of your organization in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
exercise great caution so that you do not violate Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Please take a few moments to read and review Wikipedia's policies regarding conflicts of interest, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies.

Also please note that editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you.

Comments and requests

Wikipedia is a widely-used reference work and managing conflict of interest is essential for ensuring the integrity of Wikipedia and retaining the public's trust in it. As in academia, COI is managed here in two steps - disclosure and a form of peer review. Please note that there is no bar to being part of the Wikipedia community if you want to be involved in articles where you have a conflict of interest; there are just some things we ask you to do (and if you are paid, some things you need to do).

Disclosure is the most important, and first, step. While I am not asking you to disclose your identity (anonymity is strictly protecting by our WP:OUTING policy) would you please disclose if you have some connection with CareFusion, directly or through a third party (e.g. a PR agency or the like)? You can answer how ever you wish (giving personally identifying information or not), but if there is a connection, please disclose it. After you respond (and you can just reply below), I can walk you through how the "peer review" part happens and then, if you like, I can provide you with some more general orientation as to how this place works. Please reply here, just below, to keep the discussion in one place. Thanks! Jytdog (talk) 07:13, 8 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Response to request

First of all, thank you for your work in conflict of interest. It's an important topic and essential to keeping Wikipedia the vital, unbiased reference tool that it is. I can definitively state that I have no connection to CareFusion, paid, professional, personal, or otherwise. This was true when CareFusion was a company, and it is still true now that it is a wholly owned subsidiary of Becton Dickinson. I don't think I have even ever been the beneficiary of CareFusion medical products in my personal healthcare. I am not in violation of the Wikipedia Paid-contribution terms of use, and have no conflicts of interest or disclosures to make in regards to the pages I have created or edited.

I would also add that my edits to date have not even remotely been all related to the business of CareFusion as you stated. I have created and edited pages on a variety of people, organizations, films, countries, areas of medical and law enforcement study, and technology. The people I have written about come from varied industries including law enforcement, public health, aerospace and aviation, entertainment, and safety systems engineering. Radom event gen (talk) 15:51, 8 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]