Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of songs recorded by Daft Punk/archive1
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 23:34, 18 January 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of songs recorded by Daft Punk (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): BeatlesLedTV (talk) 20:02, 14 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Now that my Barrett list has been promoted and my Beastie Boys FLC has no current outstanding comments and one support, I think I'm safe to nominate this one. I created this list in late November and have solely brought it to where it is now. I was surprised to see that Daft Punk didn't have a song list, as they are incredibly influential and extremely recognizable. I think this list meets the FLC criteria and is quality enough to become featured. All comments and concerns are appreciated. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 20:02, 14 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Source review
- Why have you mentioned the ISSN number in the second reference?
- Ref 3 is missing the publisher's name, also is doesn't seem to qualify WP:RS.
- Replaced it.
- Pitchfork shouldn't be in italics.
- Pitchfork as a website goes in italics; the publisher Pitchfork Media does not go in italics.
- cartoonnetwork.com --> Cartoon Network
- Mention Amazon only once.
- These two links should be archived.
The rest seems fine. Yashthepunisher (talk) 16:33, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Yashthepunisher All fixed; couple comments above. Thanks very much. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 21:48, 20 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
| Resolved comments from Hameltion (talk, contribs) 21:53, 26 December 2017 (UTC)[reply] |
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;Comments from Hameltion
This is pretty solid. I've additionally made made these tweaks which are hopefully all good. --Hameltion (talk, contribs) 03:51, 24 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support Great now, just check I didn't miss any plurals :) --Hameltion (talk, contribs) 21:53, 26 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you so much!! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 15:55, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
| Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 16:29, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply] |
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Comments
Otherwise looks good. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:33, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support looks like a fine list to me. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:29, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you so much! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 17:14, 27 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments by Dudley
[edit]- "After beginning in 1992 as the band Darlin' with Laurent Brancowitz,[2] the group disbanded". This does not sound right to me as it seems to say that Daft Punk started as Darlin'. Maybe "The duo started as Darlin' with Laurent Brancowitz in 1992, but the group disbanded in [date]"
- Done.
- "The band's next album, the concept album". Repetition of "album" Maybe "Next was the concept album">
- Done.
- "Since 2013, the duo has collaborated with multiple artists, such as Jay-Z and the Weeknd, being a featured artist on the latter's songs". I am not clear what you are saying here. Who was the featured artist. If the duo, can they be a featured artist, and if Jay-Z, what was it to do with the duo?
- Daft Punk was the featured artist on two songs by the Weeknd, one being "Starboy" (featuring Daft Punk). And basically, Daft Punk and Jay-Z collaborated on an unreleased song called "Computerized" when they were recording Tron: Legacy. I added it to the table.
- You might leave out Jay-Z from the lead as "being a featured artist" might be taken to refer to him, and they only collaborated on an unreleased song. Dudley Miles (talk) 16:19, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good but I think the lead still needs a bit of work. Dudley Miles (talk) 14:53, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Dudley Miles All done. Thanks so much for your comments! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 15:55, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Dudley Miles (talk) 20:45, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Giants2008 PresN There's now three supports and a source review done. Is this one all good now? BeatlesLedTV (talk) 21:35, 12 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
"alt=Daft Punk at the premiere of Tron: Legacy in 2010" - don't use the apostrophes here.- "the duo has been extremely influential" - I think this point can be made just as well without the weasel word extremely.
- "Their next single, "Da Funk", was its first commercial success" - its or their?
- "After the success of "Da Funk", Daft Punk released its first studio album Homework in 1997." Same as above
- "Next was the concept album Discovery, was released in 2001." Remove the second was.
- "The album received mixed reviews, with critics mainly focusing on the album's repetitive and minimalist nature" - with + noun + verb+ing is best avoided at FLs.
One general criticism: I think the list is a little single-centric. It needs to mention non-singles (I currently count none); this isn't supposed to be a singles discography. FrB.TG (talk) 21:16, 14 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- FrB.TG All done. I mentioned some non-singles in the lead; if you think there should be more just say so. Thanks very much for the comments! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 17:54, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Much better now. FrB.TG (talk) 18:44, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 21:46, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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