User talk:Adily1

This user is a student editor in Carleton_University/Analyzing_Cinema,_Gender,_and_Sexuality_(Winter_2018) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:07, 25 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Class Peer Review: I thought your article was really concise and clear with the information. You seem to have written it very objectively and with little attempt to explain or review the filmmaker themselves and just merely stated the facts that you had available. The layout was great, the DOB into early life and then career was well done and I thought the filmography table was very detailed and a really nice touch which laid out the extent of the filmmakers work. I do think that anymore personal information would help to flesh out the understanding of the filmmaker a little more but I could understand if you had already used any information available. Leeds.bois.114 (talk) 18:42, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Adily1, I think your page is lacking important content. I believe it would be beneficial to add a "Lead" section, and contribute more information on the early life of Ingrid Jungerman and her career. Perhaps more information on her most popular film. In addition, your information is neutral and your references are reliable. Great use of table content and visuals. — Preceding unsigned comment added by LoDups (talk • contribs) 20:55, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

A page you started (Ingrid Jungermann) has been reviewed!

Thanks for creating Ingrid Jungermann, Adily1!

Wikipedia editor Doomsdayer520 just reviewed your page, and wrote this note for you:

Thanks for developing the new article on Ingrid Jungermann.

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---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 16:23, 17 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]