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Content added (November 2018)

Hello fellow previous editors of "Geology of Hong Kong",

I have added a few sections to diversify the page. This page is an assignment from the course "Regional Geology" in the University of Hong Kong. Sections below were added for Self-reflection and peer feedback from my classmates. You are welcomed to edit and give comments on the page.

Peer feedbacks

Dear fellow Regional geology classmates,

Please add your feedback here — Preceding unsigned comment added by HarrietHKUGeology (talkcontribs) 03:33, 20 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback from George

- there are a few grammatical improvements to be made in the first couple of paragraphs in particular, especially as these are the first to be read. Nothing major but it disrupts the flow of reading and therefore could affect immediate availability of content.

- mention of the reclamation of land around hong kong could be applicable and of interest?

- further detailing of photo figures within the captions to help calrify and highlight the structure or feature being shown. The lines drawn onto the folding is nice

- the table of geologic stratigraphy is very informative and clearly presented - additions to it could involve further detailing the evolution of the depositionary environments in HK producing the observed stratigraphy, perhaps a schematic diagram? or maybe link terms to respective wiki pages