Talk:Mihr (theatre)

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Clean-up required

Most of the segments read like a promotional brochure, multitude of weasel words and poorly referenced claims. Needs a major rewrite. Charmanderblue (talk) 19:46, 3 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I think the whole performances section could be deleted, or if possible whittled down to one or two paragraphs. We aren't here to how the entire programming of any organization.ThatMontrealIP (talk) 22:27, 3 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I feel like the article in its entirety is written in non-encyclopedic language and needs a major if not near-total overhaul as it currently reads like a brochure for the establishment. I would even go as far as suggesting moving this back to draft space until these issues are resolved and barring its original creator from pushing it back into the mainspace, unless done through the Articles for Submission. I am very much unconvinced about adherence to WP:COI as part of our earlier discussions at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard but I understand if others do not share that position. Charmanderblue (talk) 22:36, 3 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Not sure about draft and AFC, but do give the article a trim as you see fit per WP:BOLD. I obviously support my above suggestion re trimming the performance list.ThatMontrealIP (talk) 23:27, 3 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I just went ahead and trimmed the giant performances list.ThatMontrealIP (talk) 23:29, 3 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much ThatMontrealIP for helping me to improve my article. I will add the part of the performances after making it appropriate to Wikipedia format.Stella Loretsyan (talk) 13:01, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Stella Loretsyan: the list of performances do not belong here. Please don't add them back. We are not a web host for everything about an orgnaization.ThatMontrealIP (talk) 13:12, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I will continue to work on my wikipedia pages according to wikipedia guidelines plus using as an example the other wikipedia pages connected with contemporary dance and performing arts and will improve my articles.Stella Loretsyan (talk) 13:44, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ThatMontrealIPI am creating my articles also taking into account wikipedia pages of the choreographers in contemporary dance. Here are some examples:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sidi_Larbi_Cherkaoui https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pina_Bausch https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Merce_Cunningham https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Martha_Graham In all these pages there are the performances which they have created. So, why some can write the performances, the others can't write, if there is a rule everyone must follow it. And where shall I write the performances, because the performances are the most important part of a choreographer's creativity?Stella Loretsyan (talk) 09:23, 6 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]