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23 August 2022
- 04:0504:05, 23 August 2022 diff hist −33 She-Hulk: Attorney at Law →Episodes: Adjust episode summary. The fight is not the important bit, that she carries on as a lawyer is the conclusion.
- 04:0004:00, 23 August 2022 diff hist −2 She-Hulk: Attorney at Law Remove what I assume is a typo ... but if it some special kind of markup please do explain.
- 03:5403:54, 23 August 2022 diff hist +1 Saul Gone Fix broken reference. Please remember to preview your edits.
- 03:4503:45, 23 August 2022 diff hist −14 Bullet Train (film) Revert unexplained cast list changes. The film credits did not list a specific name IIRC. You cannot simply add the namefrom the book. Undid revision 1105099240 by 171.232.54.219 (talk) Tag: Undo
- 03:4203:42, 23 August 2022 diff hist −363 Bullet Train (film) Rephrase plot section. Still feel like it should be even shorter and more of an overview.
- 02:5402:54, 23 August 2022 diff hist +619 Talk:Bullet Train (film) No edit summary
- 02:5302:53, 23 August 2022 diff hist −25 Bullet Train (film) Lemon and Tangerine killed 17 people rescuing the son of the White Death. None of this detail is necessary though.
- 02:4302:43, 23 August 2022 diff hist +20 The Hustler Article should mention CinemaScope. Ideally in the Production section.
- 02:4102:41, 23 August 2022 diff hist +7 Mad Dog and Glory Copyedit
- 02:3902:39, 23 August 2022 diff hist −51 Big Fat Liar Most of recent cast section bloat already reverted by TropicAces, revert this too. Undid revision 1094297404 by 2603:6080:5E08:8D00:5986:B741:492:A582 (talk) Tag: Undo
- 02:3802:38, 23 August 2022 diff hist −354 Big Fat Liar Revert plot changes. Plot section already too long. Tag: Undo
- 02:3602:36, 23 August 2022 diff hist −11 Big Fat Liar Revert plot changes. Plot section already too long. Undid revision 1093341102 by 2600:1700:41D0:1210:1163:4D9D:796E:F2B7 (talk) Tag: Undo
- 02:3402:34, 23 August 2022 diff hist −19 Secret Headquarters WP:SD40 try to keep short description under 40 characters
- 02:3202:32, 23 August 2022 diff hist −84 Where the Crawdads Sing (film) Cleanup wiki links, unnecessary duplication
- 02:2802:28, 23 August 2022 diff hist +2 Where the Crawdads Sing (film) Use the same figures consistently.
- 02:2602:26, 23 August 2022 diff hist +30 Elvis (2022 film) WP:NAMEDREFS
- 02:2002:20, 23 August 2022 diff hist +308 The Fast and the Furious: Tokyo Drift Keep the NPR reference. A secondary overview of several reviews is good to have and helps support the general statement that reviews were mixed.
- 02:0902:09, 23 August 2022 diff hist −10 Transformers (film series) Revert unexplained changes. Hidden comment explains the word order, please explain why it should be changed. Undid revision 1105986787 by 49.205.85.146 (talk) Tag: Undo
- 02:0702:07, 23 August 2022 diff hist −39 Elite (TV series) Don't equivocate.
- 02:0202:02, 23 August 2022 diff hist +1 Shut In (2022 film) WP:SDDUPLICATE "avoid duplicating information that is already in the title" ie do not repeat the year when the page title already includes it. WP:SDEXAMPLES film by director
- 02:0002:00, 23 August 2022 diff hist −17 Rock Camp: The Movie WP:MOSFILM Reception. Also MOS:AMP avoid unnecessary ampersands
- 01:5801:58, 23 August 2022 diff hist −70 Terror on the Prairie WP:FILMPLOT Plot in the plot section. Cast in the cast section.
- 01:5501:55, 23 August 2022 diff hist +21 The Quiet Girl Update Rotten Tomatoes
- 01:5301:53, 23 August 2022 diff hist +494 Talk:The Quiet Girl No edit summary
- 01:2901:29, 23 August 2022 diff hist +20 A Normal Amount of Rage Copyedit. "not completed on board" -> not completely
22 August 2022
- 23:1123:11, 22 August 2022 diff hist −35 Cypher (film) Cast in the Cast section, do not repeat in Plot section. WP:MOSFILM
- 23:0923:09, 22 August 2022 diff hist −39 Cypher (film) WP:FILMLEAD If the nationality is not singular, cover the different national interests later
- 23:0823:08, 22 August 2022 diff hist −42 Cypher (film) I don't see why that random Hindi film is relevant either. Undid revision 1104668823 by Mako001 (talk) Tags: Undo section blanking
- 23:0423:04, 22 August 2022 diff hist +1,072 Talk:The Quiet Girl Page move. IPA fix needed.
- 22:5022:50, 22 August 2022 diff hist 0 The Quiet Girl Past tense
- 22:3822:38, 22 August 2022 diff hist −30 The Quiet Girl WP:MOSFILM Accolades. Column names for the table are typically Award, Category, Recipients, and Result.
- 22:3122:31, 22 August 2022 diff hist −41 Starship Troopers (film) WP:SD40 try to keep short description under 40 characters. Repeat edit after it was reverted without explanation.
- 22:2422:24, 22 August 2022 diff hist −8 Transformers: Rise of the Beasts Reverted too far. Repeat fixes.
- 22:1422:14, 22 August 2022 diff hist +750 Hustle (2022 film) WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize not supplant the article. Move reviews out of intro and expand Reception.
- 22:0622:06, 22 August 2022 diff hist +121 Hustle (2022 film) WP:ALT image description. Describe the style and contents of the poster
- 22:0422:04, 22 August 2022 diff hist +17 Hustle (2022 film) WP:SDDUPLICATE "avoid duplicating information that is already in the title" ie do not repeat the year when the page title already includes it.
- 21:5921:59, 22 August 2022 diff hist −11 Uncut Gems This is supposed to be an encyclopedia. Copyedit for brevity. The message is important not the medium. Leave out where he wrote it, the reference is the better place for that detail.
- 21:4821:48, 22 August 2022 diff hist +433 Talk:Day Shift (film) Plagiarism accusations require reliable sources.
- 21:4121:41, 22 August 2022 diff hist +11 Day Shift (film) Verify quote. I see the fragments in the main article "Foxx is cool to the max" and "You leave "Day Shift" feeling pummeled, beaten down by an avalanche of sound and fury signifying the usual nothing." but the exact quote only exists on the Metacritic/Rotten Tomatoes summary (but Travers or ABC News would have written it anyway.)
- 21:3621:36, 22 August 2022 diff hist −41 Metacritic →Criticism: avoid vague equivocating like "mixed to negative". avoid repeating the word launch twice in the same sentence.
- 21:1421:14, 22 August 2022 diff hist −18 A Normal Amount of Rage →Reception: Copyedit. The two reviews are separate. Don't forcibly add connections.
- 21:1021:10, 22 August 2022 diff hist +83 A Normal Amount of Rage →Plot: Add a little character detail. She takes her time and is careful and deliberate about it. Then she continues to present her closing arguments. (Defeating Titania is not as important as her getting on with being a lawyer.)
- 21:0021:00, 22 August 2022 diff hist 0 Pacific Rim (film) No edit summary
- 19:1919:19, 22 August 2022 diff hist +431 Mack & Rita Having more than one reference is not a bad thing. I would like to have context inline but I have not added it yet. D+ is "alarmingly" and readers should not be left with the possibility of thinking it is a passing grade. Undid revision 1105985434 by Indagate (talk) Tag: Undo
- 17:4317:43, 22 August 2022 diff hist −4 Precious Cargo (Star Trek: Enterprise) Fix date formatting
- 17:4317:43, 22 August 2022 diff hist +518 Precious Cargo (Star Trek: Enterprise) Review from Tor.com
- 16:0716:07, 22 August 2022 diff hist −187 Transformers (film) Revert good faith edit. Please do not add blogs as sources. Undid revision 1105757980 by Eddyinblu (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
- 16:0516:05, 22 August 2022 diff hist −12 Transformers (film series) mixed to positive? Please don't equivocate like that. See past discussions: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Film/Archive_48#Mixed_to_positive_/_Mixed_to_negative Tag: Undo
- 16:0416:04, 22 August 2022 diff hist −5 Beast (2022 American film) WP:SDDUPLICATE "avoid duplicating information that is already in the title" ie do not repeat the year when the page title already includes it.
- 16:0016:00, 22 August 2022 diff hist +14 A League of Their Own (2022 TV series) →Premise: More plot needed. Arguably there are two main storylines following Shaw and Maxine.