User contributions for 67.247.56.75

15 April 2010

• 23:2223:22, 15 April 2010 diff hist −27‎ Pediatrics ‎ →‎Social role of pediatric specialists

12 December 2009

• 15:3515:35, 12 December 2009 diff hist +642‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Press TV operations in the United States: Cleanup; reinstatement of improperly deleted references
• 15:1115:11, 12 December 2009 diff hist 0‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy
• 15:0515:05, 12 December 2009 diff hist 0‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Contributions and achievements
• 14:5714:57, 12 December 2009 diff hist +7,176‎ Press TV ‎ Reorganized, copy editing, reverted vandalism
• 14:1914:19, 12 December 2009 diff hist +148‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Contributions and achievements: Added 9/11 picture
• 14:0514:05, 12 December 2009 diff hist +1‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy: added space
• 06:3706:37, 12 December 2009 diff hist +17‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy
• 06:3406:34, 12 December 2009 diff hist +237‎ Press TV ‎ →‎State Funding and Management: Added Khamenei box
• 06:0206:02, 12 December 2009 diff hist +57‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy: Added photo of Iran president
• 05:3205:32, 12 December 2009 diff hist −1‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy: Removed slash
• 05:3105:31, 12 December 2009 diff hist +1,032‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy: Added paragraph on gov't story planting with examples and references
• 05:0805:08, 12 December 2009 diff hist +185‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Personnel: Added sentence about Lindhout's release from captivity
• 04:5204:52, 12 December 2009 diff hist +560‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy: Added paragraph on PTV and Iran nuke program
• 04:2904:29, 12 December 2009 diff hist +232‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Coverage: Reinstated sentence about Iran media restrictions. Wishing something were different does not justify removing factual information.
• 04:2304:23, 12 December 2009 diff hist +51‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy: added parenthetical qualification about Hezbollah/Hamas
• 04:0604:06, 12 December 2009 diff hist +591‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Coverage: Reinstated paragraph improperly deleted - information is factual, not biased. If Shelpcoach wants to write about "Alice in Wonderland TV," he needs to start that article.
• 03:5803:58, 12 December 2009 diff hist +3,516‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Public Relations Strategy: Rewrote section to make PTV PR strategy clear
• 03:1403:14, 12 December 2009 diff hist +1‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Contributions and achievements
• 03:1203:12, 12 December 2009 diff hist −3‎ Press TV ‎ SInce another editor wants "happy talk" about Press TV, I have added a section entitled "Contributions and achievements" - Good luck finding reliable references for these!
• 03:0203:02, 12 December 2009 diff hist +67‎ Press TV ‎ Some of the J Post articles cited have accompanying actual screen shots of PTV or direct quotes from PTV officials; PTV erases these to cover their tracks, but facts are reliably reported

11 December 2009

• 14:5214:52, 11 December 2009 diff hist +48‎ Press TV ‎ Reorganized order of sub-headings; added PR Strategy section and put quotes from Sarafraz and Ahamadinejad there
• 12:0812:08, 11 December 2009 diff hist −88‎ Press TV ‎ Article needs more, not less information. Facts uncomfortable, but presented in neutral manner.

10 December 2009

• 15:1415:14, 10 December 2009 diff hist −124‎ Press TV ‎ Last edit was unconstructive - I didn't add any new reference to a blog, just cut out redundant info and POV language - is this wikipedia or Tagged.com?
• 14:3814:38, 10 December 2009 diff hist −504‎ Press TV ‎ Corrected problems and removed banners - suggestion to divide article makes no sense - does anyone really want to create a separate wikipedia article for Press TV Programs?
• 14:2114:21, 10 December 2009 diff hist −677‎ Press TV ‎ →‎History of website and satellite TV launch: Copy edit for brevity, NPOV
• 14:0814:08, 10 December 2009 diff hist −580‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Controversy: Copy edit - this section may need updating with additional entries, since the last one is from September 2009, more than three months ago! Tag: references removed
• 13:5813:58, 10 December 2009 diff hist −282‎ Press TV ‎ →‎State Funding and Management: Copy edit for brevity, NPOV
• 13:5113:51, 10 December 2009 diff hist −573‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Coverage: Copy edit for brevity, NPOV
• 13:3413:34, 10 December 2009 diff hist −14‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Availability and viewership: Copy edit for NPOV
• 13:0513:05, 10 December 2009 diff hist −140‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Coverage: Copy edit
• 12:5312:53, 10 December 2009 diff hist −394‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Availability and viewership: Copy edit - eliminated redundancies, POV language, etc.

9 December 2009

• 14:0914:09, 9 December 2009 diff hist −1‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Coverage: Spelling correction
• 14:0214:02, 9 December 2009 diff hist +29‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Availability and viewership: Added parenthetical qualification to Sarafraz statement
• 01:3401:34, 9 December 2009 diff hist +285‎ Press TV ‎ Added info to summary about PTV operations outside of Tehran
• 01:2201:22, 9 December 2009 diff hist +690‎ Press TV ‎ Expanded summary to fit the article
• 01:1001:10, 9 December 2009 diff hist −1‎ Press TV ‎ Removed slash
• 01:0901:09, 9 December 2009 diff hist +100‎ Press TV ‎ Additional (redundant but demanded by others) reference on state control and funding of PTV
• 00:5500:55, 9 December 2009 diff hist +9‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Availability and viewership: corrected grammar glitch
• 00:5300:53, 9 December 2009 diff hist +1,655‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Availability and viewership: Added info and references about presstv.ir page view data

8 December 2009

• 23:5723:57, 8 December 2009 diff hist +289‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Coverage: Rewrote sentence in response to objections of another editor & provided reference. It is a well-known fact that Iran has severe media regulations.
• 23:4723:47, 8 December 2009 diff hist +373‎ Press TV ‎ →‎State Funding and Management: Added news bulletin references
• 23:2823:28, 8 December 2009 diff hist +66‎ Press TV ‎ Numerous references regarding state funding and control already in the body - easy to find hundreds of them on the web, but why footnote such obvious facts relentlessly?
• 23:2123:21, 8 December 2009 diff hist −76‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Coverage: Sometimes, you have to read to the end of a paragraph to find a reference.
• 14:3514:35, 8 December 2009 diff hist −39‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Press TV operations in the United States: Yes, arbitrarily removed, and replaced with pablum and inaccurate material. "Early stages of production" is wrong. "Throughout the production" correct.
• 04:2904:29, 8 December 2009 diff hist +573‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Press TV operations in the United States: Added references to support retention of content arbitrarily removed

7 December 2009

• 05:4705:47, 7 December 2009 diff hist −1‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Press TV operations in the United States: Removed extra slash
• 05:4705:47, 7 December 2009 diff hist −1‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Press TV operations in the United States: Fixed punctuation
• 05:4605:46, 7 December 2009 diff hist +471‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Press TV operations in the United States: Rewrote SWA material to show relevance to PTV, as per Roaddozen's concerns. H&M is Hashemi's show & highest-profile PTV project in US.
• 03:4003:40, 7 December 2009 diff hist +80‎ Press TV ‎ →‎Press TV operations in the United States: Added another reference with SWA website mention of "Hearts and Minds" from May 2009.