User contributions for Moisejp
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17 May 2024
- 15:0015:00, 17 May 2024 diff hist +9 Born in the U.S.A. c/e
- 14:5514:55, 17 May 2024 diff hist +6 Born in the U.S.A. →Retrospective reviews: c/e
15 May 2024
- 02:0102:01, 15 May 2024 diff hist +628 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: re publishing now, probably fine current
13 May 2024
- 21:4721:47, 13 May 2024 diff hist +204 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: time zone
- 21:4421:44, 13 May 2024 diff hist +259 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: when's my last day to do copy-editing? :-)
- 21:4021:40, 13 May 2024 diff hist −102 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side two: I'd argue the saxophone part 2/3 through "Darlington County" is a solo (separate from the longer part at the "sha-la-la" end of the song, which I'd argue is not)
- 21:3721:37, 13 May 2024 diff hist +243 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: Nebraska's commercial performance
- 21:3521:35, 13 May 2024 diff hist +523 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: re. release date
- 21:3021:30, 13 May 2024 diff hist +97 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: yes
- 21:3021:30, 13 May 2024 diff hist +294 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final thoughts: re. lead
- 03:2103:21, 13 May 2024 diff hist +4 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Music and lyrics: I suggest this order of the details (or possibly switch Consequence and humour ones). Need to polish the flow between the sentences but I have to run and won't have time in this sitting
- 03:1503:15, 13 May 2024 diff hist −238 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Music and lyrics: would suggest removing this point unless there are more details about it to give it more context
- 03:0903:09, 13 May 2024 diff hist +592 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: lead, etc.
- 01:4501:45, 13 May 2024 diff hist +29 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final sessions, mixing, and mastering: my edit may not be good, and I'm not sure if it's what M & G say, but I think "original group of songs" may not be clear and requires some tweaking
- 01:3501:35, 13 May 2024 diff hist +6 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: better? (unless the new recordings were completely revamped versions?)
- 01:2601:26, 13 May 2024 diff hist +4 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. oops, correcting last edit
- 01:2301:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist +114 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: addition
- 01:2001:20, 13 May 2024 diff hist −11 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: suggestion because we use the word "recording" quite a lot, here's one spot we could replace it
- 01:1701:17, 13 May 2024 diff hist +42 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: if the sources you've used say this, I think it sounds a little clearer (I know Marsh does say this)
- 01:1301:13, 13 May 2024 diff hist +13 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: I'm not 100% sure, but my impression from what I've read is that part of the reason he recorded the BITUSA songs in May (even though they weren't part of his Nebraska vision) is that he still had some studio time in May that he'd already booked
- 01:0601:06, 13 May 2024 diff hist +10 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: not sure if "ultimately unmade" is the best phrase, but I think just "proposed" is not clear enough, and readers may wonder (I'm assuming it was unmade from looking at Schrader's filmography)
11 May 2024
- 05:4305:43, 11 May 2024 diff hist −178 Dinara Drukarova →Life and career: Seems out of date current
- 04:1404:14, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: one more for now (will catch more of these later)
- 04:1304:13, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: oops, my mistaken formatting
- 04:1004:10, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: here as well
- 04:0904:09, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: here too
- 04:0804:08, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: ref order
- 04:0704:07, 11 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final sessions, mixing, and mastering: ref order
- 04:0404:04, 11 May 2024 diff hist +73 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: May 1982 version of "Cover Me"
- 02:4702:47, 11 May 2024 diff hist −58 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. there seemed to be repeated refs here, unless you wanted to repeat them in the footnote and out (if so, please revert) Tag: Reverted
- 02:3302:33, 11 May 2024 diff hist +9 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: added "Released"
- 02:2902:29, 11 May 2024 diff hist +25 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Initial sessions and Nebraska: precision
10 May 2024
- 15:4115:41, 10 May 2024 diff hist −550 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: tentatively removing table for now per my proposal in the Talk
- 02:3402:34, 10 May 2024 diff hist −285 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Artwork: I agree, let's ditch this for the GA version; if we want to come back to this for the FAC version we may want to think about how to better clarify the "radical politics" comment
9 May 2024
- 03:4203:42, 9 May 2024 diff hist −122 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side two: Maybe we can add more details to this to compensate for the ones I've removed; have no idea where in the lyrics the road trip is supposed to be; the other details I removed also seem not clear or not quite right
- 03:3603:36, 9 May 2024 diff hist +851 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: re. outtakes
- 03:1703:17, 9 May 2024 diff hist +4 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Side one: typo
- 03:0803:08, 9 May 2024 diff hist +16 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Final sessions, mixing, and mastering: because "This Hard Land" was ultimately not included
- 03:0503:05, 9 May 2024 diff hist −250 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: Tentatively remove for now? Plotkin's own version of this (in Marsh) is quite different. Maybe for the GA version we can hold back from getting into this, but see if we want to come back to it for the eventual FAC
- 02:5502:55, 9 May 2024 diff hist +1 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: typo
- 02:5402:54, 9 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Further demos and continued sessions: ref order
- 02:5002:50, 9 May 2024 diff hist −37 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Nebraska and initial sessions: tentatively removing this detail for now--not clear what it's supposed to imply
- 02:4702:47, 9 May 2024 diff hist 0 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Nebraska and initial sessions: mid-sentence t
- 02:4102:41, 9 May 2024 diff hist −2 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: Zmbro, I know two periods is probably technically correct but it just looks so awkward; if you feel strongly these should be reverted, we can. Hmm, another solution might be to work all references to BITUSA so that they never come at the end of a sentence
- 02:3502:35, 9 May 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: mid-sentence t
- 02:3402:34, 9 May 2024 diff hist −27 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. lead para one more c/e
- 02:2802:28, 9 May 2024 diff hist +16 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. lead c/e
- 02:2302:23, 9 May 2024 diff hist −11 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. c/e: first pass at lead
- 02:1102:11, 9 May 2024 diff hist −4 The Breeders Tour 2014 →Performances and reception: Seems "No Aloha" article was since merged current
8 May 2024
- 21:2721:27, 8 May 2024 diff hist +243 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: reply
- 21:2321:23, 8 May 2024 diff hist +1 Title TK →Subsequent recording and coalescence of the group: here too
- 21:1921:19, 8 May 2024 diff hist −4 Pod (The Breeders album) →Recording: RIP Steve Albini current
5 May 2024
- 16:3616:36, 5 May 2024 diff hist +75 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: starting add pages; we can also figure out if there's a better order for these; one would be to follow the order Heylin lists them
- 16:3016:30, 5 May 2024 diff hist +259 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: A very first stab at some of the songs we could mostly likely include. I'm thinking many of the Heylin-only ones are also likely good to include, just want to take one step at a time. I will add page numbers (for Heylin) ASAP; so based on your sources looks like there's also Zanes, Himes, M & G, Dolan, Kirkpatrick (also Marsh) who talk about different ones of these. We'll add Notes as well, but for now let's leave the column as a placeholder.
- 15:4715:47, 5 May 2024 diff hist +232 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: Let's start by keeping the collapsed table simple and just add the outtakes multiple biographers mention, with Notes for each. Later maybe we can add another column to separate by Heylin's subsections (specific recording sessions), but I'd like to think a bit whether they make the most sense for classifying by--some are more concrete than others; we may or may not also be able to explicitly say these other outtakes remain "unreleased" possibly depending how explicitly our sources
- 05:4805:48, 5 May 2024 diff hist +7 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: year
- 05:4705:47, 5 May 2024 diff hist +4 m User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: italics
- 05:4605:46, 5 May 2024 diff hist +120 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 05:2505:25, 5 May 2024 diff hist +286 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Sources: Heylin is a book, so it's OK to put down here, is that the system we're using?
2 May 2024
- 05:4505:45, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1,171 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: plan
- 04:4904:49, 2 May 2024 diff hist +386 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: confused about kindle
- 04:3904:39, 2 May 2024 diff hist +44 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
30 April 2024
- 05:4805:48, 30 April 2024 diff hist +44 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Other songs recorded during the Electric Nebraska April 1982 and Born in the U.S.A. May 1982 sessions: +
- 05:4705:47, 30 April 2024 diff hist +220 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 05:4305:43, 30 April 2024 diff hist +132 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Other songs demoed Jan–April 1982: +
29 April 2024
- 01:0101:01, 29 April 2024 diff hist +844 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: update
- 00:4800:48, 29 April 2024 diff hist +1,051 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 00:3200:32, 29 April 2024 diff hist +209 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 00:2200:22, 29 April 2024 diff hist +176 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Sources: adding Song By Song
- 00:0800:08, 29 April 2024 diff hist +325 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: setting up to add the pages numbers and such...
- 00:0400:04, 29 April 2024 diff hist +168 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
28 April 2024
- 06:1306:13, 28 April 2024 diff hist +689 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: the last ones from Heylin's Song by Song
- 05:5105:51, 28 April 2024 diff hist +692 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 05:3205:32, 28 April 2024 diff hist +315 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 05:2205:22, 28 April 2024 diff hist +492 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 01:4801:48, 28 April 2024 diff hist −12 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Other songs demoed or recorded Jan-April 1982
- 01:4801:48, 28 April 2024 diff hist −13 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Songs demoed or recorded for Nebraska or Electric Nebraska
- 01:4601:46, 28 April 2024 diff hist +68 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Outtakes: +
- 01:4501:45, 28 April 2024 diff hist +1,125 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Questions: starting outtakes list
26 April 2024
- 01:3601:36, 26 April 2024 diff hist +368 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Questions: oops
25 April 2024
- 04:1704:17, 25 April 2024 diff hist +4 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Questions: precision
- 04:1504:15, 25 April 2024 diff hist +693 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Questions: +
- 03:5603:56, 25 April 2024 diff hist +643 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: this is the order of events that I used in "I'm Goin' Down"--if you had a different vision for this bit, that's cool too
- 03:1903:19, 25 April 2024 diff hist +398 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Questions: reply
- 03:1503:15, 25 April 2024 diff hist +272 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Background: We could possibly add more details about this in a footnote (if we want) so as not to disrupt the main narrative
23 April 2024
- 02:5902:59, 23 April 2024 diff hist +388 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. sounds good
20 April 2024
- 07:3007:30, 20 April 2024 diff hist +1,698 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Critical reception: working through adding the 1984 reviews from Newspapers.com
- 07:2107:21, 20 April 2024 diff hist +1,162 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Sources: two refs
19 April 2024
- 21:3721:37, 19 April 2024 diff hist +382 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Questions: re. Himes
13 April 2024
- 15:4915:49, 13 April 2024 diff hist +1,029 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Questions: replies
11 April 2024
- 03:3203:32, 11 April 2024 diff hist +81 m User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Plotkin: signature
- 03:3103:31, 11 April 2024 diff hist +7,004 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. there are a few other extended passages in Marsh such as this one that include interesting details we may be able to use, and in the coming days I'll work through scanning and adding them here
6 April 2024
- 17:1617:16, 6 April 2024 diff hist +3,637 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Recording history: tentaively put the whole section from Marsh here, but if it's too much or too cluttering we can delete sections of it (it'll all be in the history anyway)
5 April 2024
- 17:5117:51, 5 April 2024 diff hist +132 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →General thoughts: precision
- 17:1717:17, 5 April 2024 diff hist +10,603 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →General thoughts: related quotes
- 16:1316:13, 5 April 2024 diff hist +406 User talk:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. good quote
31 March 2024
- 02:2402:24, 31 March 2024 diff hist +753 User talk:Zmbro →Collab: update
24 March 2024
- 20:1520:15, 24 March 2024 diff hist +320 User talk:Zmbro →Collab: mini-update
14 March 2024
- 15:5115:51, 14 March 2024 diff hist +1,030 User talk:Zmbro →Collab: sounds good
10 March 2024
- 01:4801:48, 10 March 2024 diff hist +317 User:Zmbro/Born in the U.S.A. →Writing and recording: adding some refs
