User contributions for Septegram

16 May 2024

• 14:5214:52, 16 May 2024 diff hist −34‎ Steve Belkin ‎ →‎Biography: This is a different "Trans National Communications." The link leads to a company that makes no mention of Belkin and is headquartered in New York rather than Massachusetts. current

27 April 2024

• 06:4406:44, 27 April 2024 diff hist −1‎ Hamas ‎ →‎Second Intifada: Copyedit image caption from "Intifiada" to "Intifada." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 March 2024

• 09:0409:04, 5 March 2024 diff hist 0‎ The High Ground (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit to remove incorrect / superfluous hyphen. "A short-term solution" would be an appropriate use of a hyphen, but "in the short-term" is not. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 January 2024

• 03:3103:31, 23 January 2024 diff hist −44‎ Killing of Tony Timpa ‎ →‎Legal proceedings: Remove superseded text.

1 January 2024

• 23:3123:31, 1 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of screw drives ‎ →‎Spanner: Copyedit, change a comma between two related sentences that could stand alone into a semicolon. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 December 2023

• 09:2009:20, 9 December 2023 diff hist +1‎ Assault on Wall Street ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit: corrected "best-interest" to "best interests." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 November 2023

• 12:1112:11, 29 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan ‎ →‎Reception: Copyedit: removed superfluous/incorrect dashes. Correct usage would be "gave it a three-and-a-half star review," but not "gave it three-and-a-half stars." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 November 2023

• 02:4902:49, 22 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Even Lambs Have Teeth ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit: to black out is a verb. "Blackout" is a noun. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 November 2023

• 14:1014:10, 9 November 2023 diff hist −18‎ Cruiser rules ‎ →‎History: Removed superfluous dash from "Laconia incident." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 October 2023

• 09:2709:27, 17 October 2023 diff hist −5‎ Tor (network) ‎ →‎2018: Rephrase for slight improvement in readability. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 09:2509:25, 17 October 2023 diff hist +1‎ Tor (network) ‎ →‎2017: Copyedit; add comma for clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 September 2023

• 13:0113:01, 17 September 2023 diff hist +3‎ Unrotated Projectile ‎ Copyedit for slight improvement in grammar. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:5112:51, 17 September 2023 diff hist 0‎ Prince Eugene of Savoy ‎ →‎Personal life: Copyedit: adding the missing hyphen to "seventy-two." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 July 2023

• 14:3314:33, 25 July 2023 diff hist −28‎ The Juniper Tree (fairy tale) ‎ →‎Synopsis: Remove unnecessary exposition. This information is provided a sentence or two previously. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 April 2023

• 15:4215:42, 14 April 2023 diff hist +95‎ Jet fighter generations ‎ →‎Sixth generation (2020s): Add relevant reference to semi-autonomous drone "wingmen." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 February 2023

• 12:4712:47, 5 February 2023 diff hist +6‎ Elles (film) ‎ →‎Production: Rephrase for slightly more encyclopedic tone Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 December 2022

• 03:5103:51, 5 December 2022 diff hist 0‎ The Tin Man (novel) ‎ Copyedit incorrect capitalization Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 October 2022

• 17:0017:00, 19 October 2022 diff hist +1‎ Suits (American TV series) ‎ →‎Spin-off: Copyedit for tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 September 2022

• 13:2513:25, 15 September 2022 diff hist 0‎ Playgirl ‎ →‎History: The W3C convention is for URLs to be all lowercase. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 July 2022

• 18:0418:04, 29 July 2022 diff hist −10‎ m Rolling Thunder (video game) ‎ NPOV