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The section entitled 'The Sentinel of Liberty' is so confusing it is pretty much unreadable. I understand completely if English was not the original author's first language but the section really needs a line by line rewrite. I deleted the whole section as it really doesn't make much sense. I'll be trying to find more verifiable information about this gentleman so I can rewrite this article. The Red Morrigan (talk) 17:21, 24 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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	The section entitled 'The Sentinel of Liberty' is so confusing it is pretty much unreadable. I understand completely if English was not the original author's first language but the section really needs a line by line rewrite. If ~~there~~ ~~are~~ no ~~objections~~ I'll be ~~attempting~~ to ~~make~~ ~~sense~~ of it ~~and~~ ~~polish~~ it up a ~~bit~~. [[User:The Red Morrigan\|The Red Morrigan]] ([[User talk:The Red Morrigan\|talk]]) 17:21, 24 February 2014 (UTC)		The section entitled 'The Sentinel of Liberty' is so confusing it is pretty much unreadable. I understand completely if English was not the original author's first language but the section really needs a line by line rewrite. I deleted the whole section as it really doesn't make much sense. I'll be trying to find more verifiable information about this gentleman so I can rewrite this article. [[User:The Red Morrigan\|The Red Morrigan]] ([[User talk:The Red Morrigan\|talk]]) 17:21, 24 February 2014 (UTC)