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This looks to be of high standard on first pass, I'll make some checks on refs and so on, plus a few cosmetic style mods, before leaving further comments if necessary. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 08:27, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Having reviewed in detail and made some cosmetic changes, I believe this meets all the criteria - it's a pass, well done! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:31, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Given the standard of writing and referencing, my main suggestion for improvements would be to develop articles for the red links you've left, however given your apparent interest in related topics, I daresay that's already on your agenda. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:39, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for passing it, yep redlinks are next on my list to fill out. Cheers - Dumelow (talk) 21:27, 3 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
