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Institute of Tropical Medicine, Nagasaki University

Institute of Tropical Medicine, Nagasaki University Added source, please move to main page — Preceding unsigned comment added by TOKYO2021 (talk • contribs)

Participate in the discussion

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_Uttarakhand_flood#Page_name A discussion was already started before you created the similiar article. Please tell your opinion there. Regards

Draft:Vector Risk Management

Hi, you recently tagged my article for a speedy deletion, and I have understood why. I have changed the parts where you may think is disturbing, and I was hoping if you could check it out again. Thanks.

News1India Hindi News Channel

Hi,

I am trying to create a page for Draft:News1India, but it declined by you. This news channel in India. This is not any type of advrt. I am not understud that why this submission declined. I collect all information from Indian news channels. I am not connected to News1India. Can you help me to resolve all issus?

OFRA Cosmetics

Hi Hatchens! I saw your comment on my article denial, and I'm a little confused. I worked with a reviewer yesterday, and he helped me find super credible sources and said nothing about my tone. My goal here is to spread awareness about animal rights and cruelty-free beauty. I have another article draft I'm working on as well for an animal charity organization, Mardi Paws. Can you help me understand how I need to change my article and get it approved?

Draft:Rolf Engen

Good afternoon, Hatchens,

Thank you for taking a look at my Draft. I have made several changes over the last month or so in order to continue to formalize the tone and to make additional changes recommended by a previous reviewer (I have been working on this for a while now). I just made some additional changes as well just now. Are there any more areas that to your eye clearly need improvement? I'm having some trouble continuing to find ways to neutralize/flatten the tone (this is my first Wikipedia article, so please forgive my amateurism!). Thank you for your help - I'm looking forward to finishing this one up so I can start on my next one.

Good afternoon, Hatchens,

I went ahead and made numerous, additional changes to the draft. It is substantially more factually-driven and more neutral in tone now - thank you for your help.

Mohammed bin Rashid Centre for Leadership Development (MBRCLD)

Hi Hatchens,

I recently uploaded an article under for the Mohammaed Bin Rashid Centre for Leadership Development and I have noticed that it has gotten rejected within less than an hour. I have reviewed the article and I see nothing but facts in it, much like any other page about a learning centre or training institute. May I know why it was rejected and what I can do to improve it?

Draft: Arunabha Ghosh

Please let me know what needs to be changed. I have removed a lot of the language which sounded 'like an advertisement', but the submission was still rejected (for the third time). All of the statements made have citations and legitimate references. Not making any exaggerated claims or anything.

Draft:Manindra_Kumar_Roy

Hi Hatchens,

Thank you for taking time to look at my draft and leaving a comment on the page (Comment: VCs are generally considered notable. But, that doesn't mean puffery is allowed. Kindly redraft it, and submit it for a review.). According to the criteria for notable academics, I believe I article should qualify. I made a lot of edits and provided secondary sources that are independent of the subject in the article. It got declined few times and now I am not sure what is the reason. Are secondary sources in Bengali language are the issue or the writing style of the article? I would really appreciate any advise from you that would help. Thank you very much.--— Preceding unsigned comment added by Maximroy (talk • contribs) done by TTP1233 (talk · contribs).

Request on 13:27:13, 19 October 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Anderson1970

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  • Draft:The Bengal Club (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello, this is regarding the comments on my recent entry. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:The_Bengal_Club As I am new to Wikipedia and the editor's comments appeared to be rather broad, I am writing to request specific guidance in what needs change in what section. I would appreciate any assistance. Thank you.

Introductory paragraph:

- Does the editor wish each and every description of the subject institution by the press to be removed, or only some? Alternatively, should the descriptions simply be summarised in two or three words and the relevant press articles be footnoted? In other words, is the problem one of verbosity or verisimilitude? - Does the editor wish the quote by the well-known columnist and the well-known novelist, describing their respective perceptions of the subject institution, to be removed?

History: - Does the editor wish the names and backgrounds of important historical figures who headed the subject institution to be deleted? - In the section on 21st century history, does the editor wish all references to essays by prominent scholars and writers, describing their respective perceptions of the subject, to be removed? Or, should the perceptions be summarised in two or three words and the essays footnoted? - Does the editor wish the details of historical discrimination in the subject institution, and statements by famous historical figures on the same, to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the details of the architectural history of the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos (which are stock images on Wikimedia) to be deleted?

Notable visitors: - Does the editor wish the name of any historical figure who visited the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos of the historical figures (which are stock images on Wikimedia) to be deleted?

Notable speakers: - Does the editor wish the name of any important speaker to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the photos of two well-known personalities speaking at the subject institution to be deleted?

Notable events: - Does the editor wish the mention of any event held at the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted?

Facilities: - Does the editor wish the mention of any facility at the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the quotes from the press to be deleted? Or, perhaps summarised and footnoted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Cuisine: - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted, including the portions of potential historical significance? - Does the editor wish the favourable reviews by the press/scholars/experts to be deleted? Or, alternatively, summarised in a line or two and footnoted?

Art and artefacts: - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Literary references: - Does the editor wish for any specific mention of a writer or book to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Thank you.

Revisiting Dr. Vin Gupta contribution

Good evening,

I was hoping you'd revisit this AfC and consider approving it. This Doctor is one of the most prominent physician experts brought out on US national media regarding COVID-19 on a daily basis; he's NBC News' primary medical analyst. Viewers should know his background; other contributors to NBC have their own wikipedia page (Dr. Nahid Bhadelia as an example).

Thank you in advance for your reconsideration given the times,

Caroline

Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Vin_Gupta

nano-x article

Hi - you rejected an article under consideration on a company (nano-x) as reading like an ad - I'm not sure how you reached that conclusion given the significant amount of material referenced claiming the company is a fraud, and the imho rather neutral, fact-based and meticulously referenced history of the company I have labored to include. A parallel article exists in the hebrew wikipedia and I believe since this is a nasdaq-listed company that people would be well-served to have a serious article on it in the english version of wikipedia. Perhaps you can point out specific elements in the article that disturbed you.

Your draft article, Draft:Adalia Rose

Hello, Hatchens. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Adalia Rose".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! CptViraj (talk) 16:06, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

@CptViraj thank you for reaching out. Unfortunately I've been blocked and my edits and reviews are currently under investigation. Adalia Rose was a prominent youtuber who lived with Hutchinson-Gilford progeria syndrome and used her channel in most effective ways to create awareness (about that syndrome). Unfortunately, her draft didn't meet the criteria for an AfC approval i.e., review, which I usually adhere to. So, I humbly want you (or anyone in my network) to evaluate her notability and assist in the creation of a page (via AfC route only) that will give hope to others who are suffering from this dreadful syndrome.

Including few WP:RSP links for a quick evaluation;

BBC, Newsweek, CNN, New York Post, NBC News, Master of Arts Thesis, University of Hawaii at Manoa. - Hatchens (talk) 03:57, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Anusha Rai

After this new film Khadak, actor Has lead roles in two notable films and hence actor becomes notable as per WP:ACTOR. hoping you'd revisit this AfC and consider approving it. Ntkn766 (talk) 14:42, 29 July 2022 (UTC)

@Ntkn766 thank you for reaching out. Unfortunately I've been blocked and my edits and reviews are currently under investigation. I would recommend you to connect with KylieTastic or visit WP:TEA for the help. I wish you all the best! - Hatchens (talk) 15:00, 29 July 2022 (UTC)