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The Coffin Of Andy And LeyLey or “TCOAAL” for short, is a small indie RPG horror-maker game released in March of 2023 after a small fan base was created with the first chapter, when the second chapter released october 2023 it shocked the internet so tremendously the creator had to abandon the project, and even leave the internet, due to massive backlash. Even with its massive genius, the majority of the internet is unevenly split with so much hate overpowering the game itself
CHAPTER ONE:
The first chapter of Andy and LeyLey follows a series of two siblings, Andrew (22y) and Ashley (20y) Graves. Who have been quarantined in their parents old apartment for more than three months. The duo have had no food for over a month and are slowly dying. The entire building has been quarantined because they have been told that everyone drank contaminated water, and would be infectious to the outside world. Doors are bolted from the outside, guards monitoring the entire complex, refusing to give food to anyone, people are going mentally insane. Half the time the siblings can't get out of bed they're so exhausted from starvation. Since they are on the fourth floor there is no way they can jump off the balcony and survive, stuck in their 2 bedroom apartment that their parents abandoned them to when the quarantine was first enacted. One day the siblings are sitting on the couch, when their next door neighbor starts blasting strange music they’re so bored they decide to investigate. They snap a board off their parents bookshelf to create a bridge to sneak onto the neighbors apartment balcony. Looking through his backdoor they see him singing to the mysterious music. And then inside his apartment they see a strange floating figure appear and kill the neighbor. Not even dealing with the shock that the neighbor has been killed Ashley notices that it, quote “be a shame to watch all that meat go to waste” Andrew is so against it, but his starvation gets the best of him, so Ashley proceeds to cook the neighbor and eat him. It makes Andrew sick to his stomach, but Ashley force feeds him the meat in order he does not die. The duo Realize that when the guards monitoring the apartment are gonna knock on his door and realize that the next door cultist is dead, they run over to the apartment to clean up the mess that they and the mysterious figure made. But as they're cleaning Andrew yells that a guard is coming, so Ashley quickly hides in a closet, but almost instantly the guard finds her. In a moment of panic Andrew appears from behind, slaughtering the guard with a cleaver. With the guard dead, the siblings take his keys and Walkie-Talkie and make a break for it. They run down to the 2nd floor where the guards headquarters is placed. They notice a peg-board with a key to the room next door, they open the room next door to find a blonde woman, frightened by the siblings' sudden entrance, she asks them who they are and what they want. The Graves siblings tell her they assumed that she'd want to get out of the apartment with them, only to find the woman doesn't want to vacate because quote “the guards bring me whatever i want to eat! I get to play games all day! Why would anyone want to leave? I hope this quarantine lasts forever!” shocked to find that this woman gets to eat a mad Ashley marches back up to the neighbors apartment trying to recreate the symbols the cultist had drawn on the floor. Summoning back the strange entity who she discovers is named “Lord Unknown” after offering up the soul of the guard, Lord Unknown gives her a trinket that he says, quote “WiLL giVe yOu cLaiRvOiEnT dREaMs” when she runs back to the 2nd floor and into the woman's apartment, she finds out Andrew has killed her he said that quote “she tried to kill me with a nail gun” despite the nail gun being on the other side of the room. Ashely ignores this, trying to figure out how they are going to fully escape the apartment building. She grabs the nail gun and sees a carpet in the hallway outside. She attaches it to the 2nd floor balcony, she says “ladies first!” and then slides down very unladylike. Once Andrew is down they run off. As far away from the apartment as possible.
CHAPTER TWO: Chapter two begins, showing the siblings sitting at a cafe discussing how little money they have left. Both are fighting and arguing with each other about this. Later, they watch the news at their motel and they come to find out their old apartment has burned down, and everyone in it has died. Ashley mentions that, quote “if we hadn't escaped that could have been us” They decide to put it past them and go to bed. Ashley decides it's time to go to use the trinket Lord Unknown had given her while she sleeps. She dreams of a man coming into her and Andrews motel room, hiding in the closet for a few hours, and then killing them in their sleep. She wakes up to tell Andrew who was sleeping on the couch. They devise a plan the next morning that they'd go into their motel to pretend to grab something before going on a planned walk in the park to catch the killer. Part of the plan is Ashley stating where they're going and what they're going to do, hoping the killer will hear them from the closet and follow them. Once their in the park and know the killer is following them the quickly split up and LeyLey loudly states their going to play a game of hide-and-go-seek, so now Andrew has to look for the killer, once the killer is found Andrew empties the gun canister on the man after them, killing him. Ashley is a little upset Andrew wasted all the bullets, they find the man's car, finding out he was an entirely hired hitman, after stealing his car, they wonder what they should do now that they're basically out of money. Andrew recalls their mother possibly mentoning where her and their father were moving, so he drives there. Once they arrive they are greeted by a large house with a well kept front yard. Both are pissed beyond belief that their parents would abandon them and move to somewhere so much nicer than quote ‘their old crappy apartment’. Both siblings know they aren't here to say hello to the birth givers, but instead to rob the parents blind. They break in through the back window and start poking around. As Andrew was looking around his parents bedroom, he finds two death certificates for Andrew and Ashley graves. “I didn't know we were dead,” Ashley states. As the siblings continued rooting through the house, their mother came home in the middle of the day. Renee Graves very stupidly yells out, quote “i-is anybody there?” Andrew and Ashley quickly decide to just tell her it's them. Renee, who believed her two children were dead, is a bit surprised they are there, but is not pleased. After an awkward conversation over coffee about politics, Renee is obviously avoiding the massive elephant in the room. It's clear she doesn't want her children there. When their father arrives home from work the siblings are greeted with somehow less excitement than they received with Renee. After a very silent dinner, Renee asks the siblings to do the dishes since she has a headache and wants to lay down. As they do the dishes Ashley mentions that they could just kill their parents, Andrew dismisses this idea for now. As they’re talking Andrew puts 2 of his fingers through Ashley shorts belt loop. Renee comes in and sees this, and she tells them that they can stay the night, but quote “it should probably be in two separate beds” Andrew sleeps on the couch, and as Andrew sleeps he has a dream, remembering when he and Ashley were kids, and this little girl named Nina who had a crush on him. 5 year old Ashley is jealous of Nina and decides to have her come play hide and seek with her and Andrew in an old abandoned warehouse. After a few rounds, LeyLey and Andy inactivated the plan LeyLey created. And LeyLey leads Nina into a box to hide in. and then sits on top of it. After Andy locks it with a big stick, Nina mentions that this probably isn't a good idea considering her asthma. LeyLey tells Andy that Nina will be fine and that they’ll come get her in the morning. When they come back the next day and open the dusty box they find 7 year old Nina dead. Andy panics because she's dead, LeyLey panics because she doesn't know where to hide the body. In the end they just bury Nina in a grassy area nearby the warehouse. Andrew wakes up to Ashley sitting on the floor next to the couch telling him how they should kill their parents. After almost no thought Andrew agrees. Renee comes from behind (not seeing her daughter) and tells Andrew that she needs to talk to him about Ashley, when she comes around to the front she finds Ashley resting her head on her brother's knees. Ashley pulls out the gun and points it at her mother, Renee, who doesn't know that the gun is out of bullets, Andrew instructs Renee to follow Ashley into the basement, Andrew himself goes into his parents room, searching in the closet and finds a rope, Their father wakes up and asks what Andrew is doing. Andrew tells him that Renee needs help in the basement. So his father goes down to the basement, confused. Andrew follows him down there tying his mother up to a wooden pole with the rope, and finding old Christmas lights, he ties up his father on the same pole, next to Renne. After asking Renee where her credit card and what pin code is, Renne asks, quote “that's all this is about?! Money?!” After Andrew demands the code once more, he leaves Ashley in charge to watch the parents, to try and recreate the symbols their old neighbor the cultist had left behind. While he runs to an ATM. Ashley is left pointing an empty gun at her parents while she draws the symbols on the ground, as she tells Renee about how horrible she was. Renee reveals she knew about Andy and LeyLey killing Nina when they were younger, quote “I knew you had something to do with it ever since the news said she was found dead near that wearhouse you used to play at” Renee says she must be a wonderful mother because she never contacted the police about what the young siblings had done. Andrew comes back and yells at Renee for having a draw limit on her card and not mentioning it, so he drags her upstairs to call the bank and let them know she wants the entire limit removed. This time Ashley goes to get the remainder of the money out of the bank, leaving Andrew with the parents. Renee begs and pleads to let her and her husband go. Andrew refuses, after his father offers him a high position at his work and Andrew refuses yet again Renee states “what does she give you that makes all of this worth it?” and Andrew replies that she doesnt give him anything Renee says “oh i know. You fuck her.” Andrew flips out at Renee because he doesn't do those things, Renee ignores him and tells him how disgusting that is. Ashley comes home with all the money. They finish the symbols, and neither know how to recreate the music their neighbor played. Ashley announces that she could sing it, so to save everyone's ears Lord Unknown appears. The siblings offer up their parents' souls for two clairvoyant dreams for the trinket. As quick as he came, Lord Unknown takes the souls and leaves. As the siblings untie their parents discover that they are still breathing. They thought that when their souls were gone, they would be dead, but instead the parents are basically vegetables. Andrew states that this quote “changes everything” because now they have to kill their parents themselves. Ashley doesn't seem to care and gets to chopping right away. She scrapes the meat off of them and throws it into a cooking pot with some vegetables she found in her dead parents backyard garden. Once Andrew drains all of the blood into the drain in the basement shower, they think about what they're going to do with the bones. Ashley suggests they burn them in the fireplace in the living room, but it can't get hot enough to burn the bones. So they leave the bones alone for now. Ashley cooks the ‘parent soup’ and serves it for dinner, when Andrew says the soup is dry and Ashley says she’ll get it right next time, Andrew gets upset that Ashley thinks there will be a next time. After dinner, Ashley decides she wants to use her trinket for more dreams. ENDING ONE: Ashley dreams her and andrew get in a fight and he kills her by choking her out ENDING TWO: Ashley dreams about the same fight, but if you choose the other option Ashley shoots him in the head, killing Andrew. Ashley refuses to tell Andrew about either of these dreams ENDING THREE: The most infamous ending of them all. Andrew asks if he can try the trinket, Ashley replies that it be stupid to cut it in half, and Andrew yells that they could just hold hands with it in between their hands. So they go to their parents' bed and fall asleep with the trinket in between their hands. The clairvoyant dream is the aftermath of them just having an incestious relationship, nothing is shown but it's made obvious what just happened. Andrew wakes up sick to his stomach, and neither of them want to talk about it. Andrew declares it was a punishment from Lord Unknown for trying to cheat the trinket out of a dream. They put it past them and try to finish figuring out what to do with their parents, Ashley suggests they could throw them into the ocean, but Andrew mentions that dental records may know who the bones belong to. So they rip the teeth out of their parents' skull and throw them in a garbage bag full of rocks to throw into the ocean. As they’re driving there Ashley seems sad about something, Andrew just assumes it's because of the dream. After disposing of their parents off a bridge, the siblings talk about what to do next. Ashley wants to live in their parents house, but Andrew says that everyone thinks that he and she are dead. So they just decide to take the money and drive away in the hitman's old car, never to be heard from again. After a hug and getting back in the car, chapter two ends.