Talk:Adrian Richard Lewis

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Review of draft

Hi Roccie. I don't work on drafts much, so it would be a good idea to find someone who does. Here are some initial thoughts:

The article needs a great deal of Wikipedia:Manual of Style work: formatting, organization, use of titles. Again, someone who works on drafts and new articles would be very helpful.

You should use consistent formatting for the references. Wikipedia:Citing sources covers this. Author, title, publisher, and publication date are essential for other editors to be able to quickly review the article and spot areas for improvement.

I often turn to good articles to find example articles to work from. Wikipedia:Good_articles/History has a section titled "Historians, chroniclers and history books" that may help.

I also look for Wikiprojects that apply to the article I'm working on. The directory is here: Wikipedia:WikiProject_Council/Directory. Wikiprojects can have a variety of helpful resources. --Hipal/Ronz (talk) 01:24, 23 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]