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Please provide sources for this information. Also, you'll want to review our neutral point of view policy for ideas on how to include information without adding so much bias. Thanks. .:.Jareth.:. ^babelfish 16:21, 24 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

We need a photo of the Pine Lake Shuttle. 65.19.76.18 (talk) 01:43, 28 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Cleanup needed

Recently I reassessed the article as a Start Class as well as placed cleanup tag on the top of the article. I cleaned up the lead and a bit of the article but it needs more work. One of the largest issues is a lack of reliable secondary references and in-line citations. There's a lot of info on the article that is informative and useful but needs sources. Much of the Pine Lake Campus section is written like a travel guide and requires some rewriting, sourcing and cleanup. That should help with an unbalanced issue, the section makes up the entire campus section (at first reading I thought that was the main academic campus). Also the history and academic sections could use some expansion. One paragraph for a college that dates back to the late 1700s is a bit light. For more help on what info to include, see the article structure section of College and university article guidelines. Thanks and happy editing! Bhockey10 (talk) 22:47, 12 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Note: http://www.laphamsquarterly.org/essays/trust-issues.php?page=all - 06:18, 21 September 2011 (UTC)

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 == Cleanup needed ==
 Recently I reassessed the article as a Start Class as well as placed cleanup tag on the top of the article. I cleaned up the lead and a bit of the article but it needs more work. One of the largest issues is a lack of reliable secondary references and in-line citations. There's a lot of info on the article that is informative and useful but needs sources. Much of the Pine Lake Campus section is written like a travel guide and requires some rewriting, sourcing and cleanup. That should help with an unbalanced issue, the section makes up the entire campus section (at first reading I thought that was the main academic campus). Also the history and academic sections could use some expansion. One paragraph for a college that dates back to the late 1700s is a bit light. For more help on what info to include, see the article structure section of [[WP:UNIGUIDE|College and university article guidelines]]. Thanks and happy editing! [[User:Bhockey10|Bhockey10]] ([[User talk:Bhockey10|talk]]) 22:47, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
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+http://www.laphamsquarterly.org/essays/trust-issues.php?page=all - 06:18, 21 September 2011 (UTC)