Talk:1904 Chappaqua tornado

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GA Review[edit]

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The second paragraph of the impact section is confusing. You use "the next home", but in what order are the homes listed? Looks good otherwise. –Juliancolton | Talk 16:04, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Looks better now. –Juliancolton | Talk 16:31, 23 August 2009 (UTC)