According to the person who wrote that report? :P --12george1 (talk) 16:42, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
"while located near Marie-Galante, Guadeloupe" - the island is very small, and that location is kinda random. Thus, I don't think you need to specify where on "Guadeloupe", and the next sentence is kinda useless
How can there be "considerable damage" near Miami while also "nothing very serious resulted"?
Hmm, the report actually says something like that, "Considerable local damage was done in Miami and vicinity, although nothing very serious resulted." I'm not sure how I should fix this.--12george1 (talk) 16:42, 13 October 2014 (UTC)
"Three people drowned in the area. Damage reached approximately $2 million." - merge
" Later on November 12, it curved northwestward." - why? And why did it move to the southwest?
It's a decent article, but doesn't quite feel done. Lemme know when you address these comments, and I'll reassess. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:57, 6 October 2014 (UTC)
Hurricanehink, it's been over five weeks since the article was last edited by the nominator. If it isn't ready—and there was a significant edit on October 14—then maybe it's time to start thinking about closing this as unsuccessful. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:56, 21 November 2014 (UTC)