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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 19:34, 27 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Prose

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Lede

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Comments from nominator

I've added some sentences to the lead, would appreciate comments on them. On attendance, I found a mention in one of the contemporary sources I was using they estimated at least 7,000 spectators were in attendance and another that estimated at least 10,000 but I'd give more credit to the modern newspaper report than the eye-witness account on this statistic. I also would like to get your thoughts on my updated description of the goals scored by Arenas. Should I also include the ones scored by Barca in the lead?— Ixtal ( T / C ) Non nobis solum. 00:29, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

General

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  • The body starts with oth teams had qualified to the Copa del Rey as champions of their regional leagues - could we maybe get a sentence or two explaining what the tournament is, how you qualify (I see it's all the champions of all the individual leagues, but that's not how it's played now for instance), and what teams are we talking about. The lede and body should be independently readable. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:13, 7 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    By explanation of the tournament, you mean Copa del Rey? I fail to see what additional information needs to be explained about how the tournament works and why it wouldn't be more appropriate for the article on the 1919 Copa del Rey than the final match one.— Ixtal ( T / C ) Non nobis solum. 00:29, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This article itself needs to be readable without clicking onto another article. A very brief message saying what the cup is, and that it was an eight team tournament would suffice. Then, when introducing the teams, a small message saying that teams qualified by being a winner would cover it. If we didn't include information in the way you outlined above, you'd never include info on who they beat to make the final. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 20:35, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

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The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.