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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 14:45, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Going to take a look at this NASCAR article soon. good888 (talk) 14:45, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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  • "One lap later, Dave Blaney drove to his garage" Since Blaney was nowhere near the front, I don't think this is notable.
  • "as Tony Raines went to his garage." Likewise for Raines.
  • "On lap 59, it was announced that Michael McDowell and Joe Nemechek had retired from the race." Once again, I don't think this is notable.
  • "On lap 115, the pace car moved on track. During the caution, which was caused by debris, most of the leaders made pit stops." Suggest rewriting to: On lap 115, the pace car moved on track because debris was spotted on the track. During the caution, most of the leaders made pit stops."
  • "On lap 162, Johnson's lead of 3.4 seconds was reduced to nothing when the pace car moved on track. During the caution, which was caused by debris, some of the leaders elected to make pit stops." Suggest rewriting to: "On lap 162, Johnson's lead of 3.4 seconds was reduced to nothing when debris was spotted on the track, causing a caution. During the caution, some of the leaders elected to make pit stops."
  • "Two laps later, a multi-car collision occurred on the back straightway as Earnhardt, Jr. got loose, and collected eight cars." State who was caught up in the crash.

Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 09:54, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]