Talk:2017 FA Cup final/GA1

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 08:12, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Taking a look now.....will make straightforward copyedits as I go and drop queries below...(keeps my mind off some really stupid matches....sigh) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:12, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

~~Beginning of Arsenal ...ummm....."Arsenal" is mentioned 6 times in 6 successive sentences....try to reword at least a couple...?~~
Reduced. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The match was also noted for Sutton United's reserve goalkeeper Wayne Shaw being investigated by the Football Association and Gambling Commission for eating a pie pitchside despite there being betting odds on him doing so ~~- I don't follow this..am intrigued, maybe emphasis wrong or missing?~~
It was bonkers really, such an obvious flouting of the betting rules. I've tried a re-word, let me know what you think. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That makes sense now Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:19, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
~~Also have 3 "Arsenal" s in 3 final sentences...maybe reword one?~~
Hopefully reduced a bit. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
~~In the fourth round, they were drawn with Championship team Brentford at home. Chelsea won 4–0 with goals from Pedro, Willian, Branislav Ivanović and Batshuayi.~~ ~~- could tighten into one sentence I'd have thought...~~
Tweaked. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
~~Alotta "Chelsea"s in the Chelsea section too....~~
Reduced, rejigged, hopefully to your satisfaction. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
....was then held to honour the victims of the Manchester attack - link "Manchester attack"
Manchester Arena bombing is linked two paras above, is it not clear that it's the same thing? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
....~~Midway through the half, Chelsea's Hazard...~~ ~~- do we need to specify "Chelsea" here?~~
Not if you believe it to be clear enough. Removed. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise reads well and is comprehensive. On target....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:42, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Casliber cheers, all addressed I think. Spurs not having a good couple of months really, but probably still better supporting them than being a Tractor Boy.... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:22, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Earwigs copyvio clear

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