Talk:Ainsley Hayes/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rlink2 (talk · contribs) 14:33, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Will open up with comments shortly.

Comments here (I find that this way is easier than trying to "tq" everything I want to edit or add - my browser crashes alot and its harder for me to edit wikitext). Bolded and strikethough text is my opinion. Sometimes its a suggestion to replace something, other times its an invintation to write more or rephrase. You can reply to any of those concerns here.

Some off hand comments:

Regarding "mixed to positive" doesn't mixed imply positive and negative, so whats the need to write "positive"? COrrect me if I'm wrong.

I have to say, the referencing style is intersting. Can't say I've seen it before. But it works.

Overall, good work. Rlink2 (talk) 14:57, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, @Rlink2! Your prose review style is interesting, I may copy it for future runs. (By the way, there might be a way for you to just copy the page to the new site, make the edits you want, and show the changes as a Special:Diff link). I implemented most of the changes, except a couple:

"mixed to positive": some of the coverage was mixed (good+bad), others positive. I changed it to "ranges from" mixed to positive, I'll change it in the lead too.
"Ainsley's": Procter's, not Ainsley's.

Other than that, all good! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 19:53, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Theleekycauldron

Your prose review style is interesting, I may copy it for future runs. Feel free to do so. One time i had a very detailed and lengthy response to something on wiki typed up, I hit submit, and lost it all due to my not so good internet connection. I ought to switch browsers, but Firefox and Pale moon have their own problems. At least with the VE, if you hit submit and the connection fails, you don't lose your work. Off topic banter aside ....

make the edits you want, and show the changes as a Special:Diff link Yeah i was going to do that, but I forgot.

Anyways, looks good, will pass Rlink2 (talk) 22:13, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Rlink2: thanks so much! :D theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 22:33, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]