Talk:Art Elective Programme (Singapore)
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[edit]Things that could be improved:
- Referencing
- Many key information needs referencing (eg: claim that "chools that offer AEP as a subject would normally have an art room, a media lab and facilities to store and use art materials, such as pottery." would need a reference)
- Could use more secondary references (eg: newspaper articles, magazines etc.) in place of primary sources such as school websites
- Tone
- Tone of article leans towards the promotional side, eg: "However, AEP is not just about doing art."
This article is a good start and can definitely keep improving! Good luck!--Lionratz (talk) 02:08, 2 November 2016 (UTC)