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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:54, 24 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: (Just in case you'd forgotten about this.) Harrias talk 10:09, 6 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • No DABs, external links OK
  • Images properly licensed
  • "nominal" victory rather than "notional"
  • were carrying out reconnaissance passive voice "reconnoitering"
  • Link Somerset, musketeer, dragoon, artillery on first use
  • were able to pull back from the hill under the cover
  • town itself but were unable comma after "itself"
  • defence on Yeovil Bridge, over the River Yeo, a combination of infantry and artillery awkward
  • Before the entire foot >Before all of the foot
  • amongst Moreton's men too "as well"
  • Which son of William Balfour?
  • lost five, and the Royalists around 20 MOS says that spelling needs to be consistent for quantities of the same things, overriding the normal requirement about spelling numbers below ten
  • No need to link publisher locations--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:32, 8 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]