Talk:Battle of Kampar

Suggestions

I've done a bit of copy editing work on this article and have the following suggestions for improvement:

• currently there is only a Japanese estimate of the British/Indian casualties - are their any Allied accounts that confirm or contradict this number?
• are there any Japanese sources that relate to this battle?
• if possible, more precise citations for the Smith work would help improve the verifiability of the article. For instance, Footnote # 2 has a large page range, but it could be possible to cite individual pages, or at least smaller page ranges;
• the Jeffrey source is listed but doesn't appear to be specifically cited. If possible, in line citations to this work should be worked in;
  • I've moved this to a Further reading section, but if anyone has access to the source and wants to add some citations to it, it could just be moved back to the References section. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:23, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
• for a B class rating, the article will need some more in line citations, I have added tags to where I feel they are needed;
  • I have added in a few references from a couple of different sources, so I think that this has been taken care of now. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:23, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
• there are a couple of dead link tags, if possible these could be replaced with archived versions from http://web.archive.org.
  • I have done this now. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:23, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

I don't have any sources, so I'm unable to help in this regard, sorry. Good work so far. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 07:14, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

I have fixed a couple of these, but am not able to deal with the top three. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:23, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

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