Talk:Belldandy/GA1

GA Review

I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

• Per WP:LEAD, an article this size should have at least three full paragraphs in the lead. I'd suggest adding information such as her original conception, abilities, and her different depictions.

• Done. - Bilby (talk) 03:16, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

• Image:Belldandy and Holy Bell.png and Image:Original Goddess.jpg both need to be low resolution (less than 100,000 pixels).

• Done. Both images were reduced by 50%. - Bilby (talk) 03:53, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

• "August, 1988" --> "August 1998" - don't put a comma between months and years

• Got it. I checked, and couldn't see any other dates in the text, so hopefully I found them all. - Bilby (talk) 03:41, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

• It might be a good idea to add the name "Holy Bell's appearances" as a title for the table (instead of a header) and float it to the right under the heading "Holy Bell". This will cause the text to text-wrap around it and reduce all the ugly white-space.

• Done. I think it is a good idea - I might work on where to position the table within the text, but having it on the right certainly improves the layout. - Bilby (talk) 03:16, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

• Episode titles should be in quotation marks.

• I think I got all of those - let me know if I stuffed up anywhere, and I'll take care of it. - Bilby (talk) 04:08, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

• Now I feel stupid - I completely missed the episodes in the table. :) Particularly dumb considering the time I spent playing with the table and hunting down a method for making it sit to the right. Thanks! - Bilby (talk) 00:16, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

There are also some comma issues, but I don't mind fixing those myself. I'll allow seven days for improvements. Nikki311 23:53, 17 July 2008 (UTC)

• Thanks! I'll get on to those immediately. :) - Bilby (talk)
• I've made a pass to fix the commas - I'm aware of that being a problem in my writing, but I've never been able to get out of the habit. :) Any help with this would be much appreciated. - Bilby (talk) 03:41, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

• Hopefully I've managed to tackle all of the above, but if there are any more changes you find that it needs, or if I stuffed up somewhere, just let me know and I'll be really happy to take care of it. And thanks heaps for reviewing the article! - Bilby (talk) 04:08, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

• Great work. I did a bit of copyediting and have passed the article. Nikki311 00:19, 19 July 2008 (UTC)