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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • The source for the poster links to Pinterest, a non-reliable source, so I would swap it for something else.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • That being said, the rest of the poster's non-free rationale is in excellent shape.
  • I also couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
  • "he meet several" → "he met several"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to made another" → "to make another"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "written by Bhansali, Bhavani Iyer".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "budget around" → "budget of around"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "With a total grossing" → "With a total gross"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Best Actor for Bachchan".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot and cast

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  • "after recovered" → "after recovering"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Debraj (an elderly alcoholic teacher) enters" → "Debraj, an elderly alcoholic teacher, enters"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "when he see" → "when he sees"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "back to be insolent" → "back to being insolent"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm not sure whether Indian English uses the ending "se" or "ze", but if its the second one, change "recognise" to "recognize" and "vocalise" to "vocalize".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a expressive woman, and is even able to dance" → "an expressive woman who is even able to dance"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Plot section is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • No issues with cast.

Production

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  • "Hindi film ever" → "Hindi films ever"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he would quoted" → "he would say"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In an interview to" → "In an interview with"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "inspired from" → "inspired by"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "As a gratitude" → "As gratitude"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Bachchan take a hiatus" → "Bachchan took a hiatus"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "To prepare his part" → "To prepare for his part"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a special training" → "special training"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he did an extensive research" → "he did extensive research"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "what happen" → "what happens"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "physical disability" → "physical disabilities"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "an theatre actress" → "a theatre actress"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "produced, financed".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "sure for it" → "sure about it"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "lot monochromatic" → "lot of monochromatic"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "khaki".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "between 1950s" → "between the 1950s"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "were chose" → "were chosen"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "highest-paid actors in Bollywood".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "film in his career" → "films in his career"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he shoot a film" → "he shot a film"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "promised to collaborated" → "promised to collaborate"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "filmed is the" → "filmed was the"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Mukerji stretch out her hand when snow starts to fall" → "Mukerji stretching out her hand when snow begins to fall"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Media reported" → "The media reported"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "would ended" → "would end"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "mostly of the set" → "most of the set"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "resulting a shooting" → "resulting in a shooting"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "for did not return 390" → "for not returning 390"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Deputy Chief Minister" → "the Deputy Chief Minister"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Soundtrack

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  • "Armenian instrument" → "the Armenian instrument"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release

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  • "film had a good" → "film had good"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was coincided" → "coincided"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "28 August 2009 in" → "28 August 2009 on"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a non-Korean films" → "a non-Korean film"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Black has been screened" → "Black was screened"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Prime Video since" → "Prime Video in"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

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  • "mostly critics" → "most critics"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Box office

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  • Add a comma after "the Netherlands".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Accolades

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  • "win the all four" → "win all four"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "Best Actor".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Legacy

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References

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  • The link to Rotten Tomatoes is unnecessary per WP:ELRC.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The "Films by Sanjay Leela Bhansali" should go on top.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:03, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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