Talk:Bodyamr

Paraphrase[edit]

I added the "close paraphrase" tag, since the later part of the article is only slightly reworded from a source at http://www.nouse.co.uk/wp-content/article_images/body/2009/03/0271.pdf . It needs to be thoroughly rewritten. Gonzonoir (talk) 08:45, 1 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I changed the format of the article - adding 2 new headings, and placing references at the end. --BwB (talk) 16:30, 27 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]