Talk:Burt's solar compass/GA1
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 07:52, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
Happy to review the article.
Failed without further review
[edit]As the article is not broad in its coverage, as it only addresses one example of the invention, and discusses that example in copious amounts of detail, I am 'quick failing' it. I would consider seeking to rename the article (something like 'Burt’s solar compass', and creating a more general article about solar compasses.
Examples of sun/solar compasses not featured adequately (or at all in the article) include:
- Bagnold's compass (ref)
- Sun compasses in the animal world - already covered by another article (ref)
- Viking sun compasses (ref)
- Howard sun compass (ref)
- The Apollo mission sun compass (ref)
- Electro-optical solar compasses (ref) (ref)
- Solar compass apps (ref)
- Amitchell125 (talk) 19:44, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review and hints. This will give me a project to do while I have these Stay Home orders. I will completely rework the article and resubmit later. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:55, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
- Amitchell125 (talk) 19:44, 13 May 2020 (UTC)