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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 10 January 2022 and 11 March 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ramirezd2 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Beck Woollen, Neil Givens, Jennyfayfay.

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 August 2020 and 5 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mmcandrew. Peer reviewers: Liziming99, Viip42.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 18:37, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lead concision

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Hello fellow wikipedians! I'm planning on making a series on edits on this article, primarily focusing on re-organizing the existing text to be clearer. The first edit I'll be making is to the article lead, which I feel is a little wordy and confusing. A lot of the information that I think needs to be cut from lead is really important, though, so I plan to add it back in later in more appropriate sections. Mmcandrew (talk) 02:10, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reorganization

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The next major edit I'm planning to do for this article is to re-arrange the sections and subsections. I think this should help clarify where certain information can be found, so right now a lot of the sections are unclear or redundant. I'm mostly doing this by re-arranging the content that the page already had, so I will probably need to go back through each section for flow and clarity. Mmcandrew (talk) 23:30, 19 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Additional High Altitude Sites

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Hello fellow editors! I'm planning on adding more high altitude sites to this article. Ramirezd2 (talk) 18:31, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Reworking the Selection of Children section

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Hello again! To finish off my edits I am going to add more detail and references to the "Selection of Children" section, and rewrite some of it for clarity. Ramirezd2 (talk) 05:57, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]