Talk:Castle Walls/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: My love is love (talk · contribs) 01:01, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

Hello HĐ. I will be the reviewer of this article.

Overall

• I think that it's too short as it is now. Try to add more content from the reviews of the album on Metacritic like Prefix Magazine, Boston Globe etc. Once you finish with that, I will continue with the review as there are not many mistakes in its current state.

• I have added some more reviews. Thanks, Simon (talk) 05:06, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

Lead

• "The TRACK" - Change the capital letters or maybe the whole word to song.

• Fixed by SNUGGUMS. Simon (talk) 05:06, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

Background

• "T.I. talks about the track's inspiration" - Maybe change this one to "During an interview T.I. talked about the track's inspiration"
• "however it was never done" - try to change this to something different as it sounds weird now.

• Fixed by SNUGGUMS. Simon (talk) 05:06, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

Non-reviewer comment: I agree that this could use expansion. I've made some copyedits to the article and it should be in better state now. HĐ can expand this article. Good luck with the nomination! SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 04:06, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

Thank you My love is love for reviewing this one! And thanks SNUGGUMS for helping in. Much appreciated, Simon (talk) 05:06, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

My pleasure :). SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 05:35, 16 July 2014 (UTC)

Everything has been adressed. Passing. My love is love (talk) 16:52, 17 July 2014 (UTC)

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