Talk:Cedric Oglesby/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:31, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

added african american cat
"Conference, while playing" remove comma
was he first or second team his freshman year
add these honors to the infobox
"as a punter, after" remove comma
"With 52 total points in 11 games he placed first on the team" fix grammar
"tied the record for best punt average, " what record,the record for that bowl game?
"per-punt" remove hyphen
"coach, Willie Jeffries" is that his head coach
was he all-MEAC in 98 or 99?
Did he have any career records?
did he do anything his senior year of note
"released on May 1" that transaction is for the day before because PFA has april 30.

Thats all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:45, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.