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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:05, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
I'll make straightforward copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and drop questions below. Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:05, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
Lead has three consecutive sentences beginning with "She..."
Last two sentences of lead have "currently in them
Add descriptor for Riva Celso in lead
- "
largely unsuccessfully" tried to sell- de-quote.
her first "big" game- de-quote. you mean commercially successful? or...what?
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the free game was downloaded by "countless thousands",- I think this is the sort of thing that an independent source would be needed. Also de-quoting and rewording.
- add descriptor for Gamasutra
There are rather alot of direct quotes. I do agree that many are good and add to the prose...but I think if some could be ditched it'd be good.
Interesting read overall. Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:22, 8 December 2012 (UTC)
- I've "addressed" your "points", as well as removed/reworded "a bunch of quotes". --PresN 01:56, 9 December 2012 (UTC)
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
- Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
- No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:06, 9 December 2012 (UTC)