Talk:Club Harlem/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"Williams was a medical student at Penn" - change to University of Pennysylvania Done
"It came to be considered the "Cotton Club" of Atlantic City." - who exactly considered this point?

I've reworded this as the ref doesn't indicate who. We hope (talk) 14:01, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"and arrested 32," - I'm guessing 32 people or employees? Done
Adelaide, Australia is a dab link Done
Change Northeastern US to Northeastern United States and wikilink it for accessability Done

"The music played from 10 pm Saturday night to 6 am Monday morning." - change 10pm and 6am to 10 p.m and 6 a.m for consistency Done
"Long time Atlantic City disc jockey Pinky Kravitz recalled that by 3AM," - ditto Done
"in New York City for 6 months" - spell out 6 Done
"and then in the summer play at the Club Harlem" - perform would be better since play is mentioned previously in the sentence this is in Done
"to sing with Sammy Davis, Jr., and sang with Davis," - reptition of sing/sang Done

I don't think easter should be linked since it's a common term. Also the same issue is present in the lead Done

Nice work by everyone who worked on this article. On hold until my points have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 13:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again We hope for taking action quickly. Article is now GA. MWright96 (talk) 14:12, 29 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]