Talk:Club Harlem
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Coordinates and map location incorrect?
[edit]The coordinates and map location for Club Harlem in infobox are several blocks from Kentucky Avenue. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bunkyray5 (talk • contribs) 01:51, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
Display issues at newspaperarchive
[edit]Originally, I had to clip the news story from the Altoona Mirror in 2 segments due to display issues at newspaperarchive.com. When I went back to look for something else, I found that the last half of the news story was displaying here as a ref link as "Image not found". A complete copy of the story is now hosted elsewhere as the article's ref. We hope (talk) 20:54, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
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History
[edit]- "Williams was a medical student at Penn" - change to University of Pennysylvania Done
- "It came to be considered the "Cotton Club" of Atlantic City." - who exactly considered this point?
- I've reworded this as the ref doesn't indicate who. We hope (talk) 14:01, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- "and arrested 32," - I'm guessing 32 people or employees? Done
- Adelaide, Australia is a dab link Done
- Change Northeastern US to Northeastern United States and wikilink it for accessability Done
Shows
[edit]- "The music played from 10 pm Saturday night to 6 am Monday morning." - change 10pm and 6am to 10 p.m and 6 a.m for consistency Done
- "Long time Atlantic City disc jockey Pinky Kravitz recalled that by 3AM," - ditto Done
- "in New York City for 6 months" - spell out 6 Done
- "and then in the summer play at the Club Harlem" - perform would be better since play is mentioned previously in the sentence this is in Done
- "to sing with Sammy Davis, Jr., and sang with Davis," - reptition of sing/sang Done
Final years and demolition
[edit]- I don't think easter should be linked since it's a common term. Also the same issue is present in the lead Done
References
[edit]Nice work by everyone who worked on this article. On hold until my points have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 13:13, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks again We hope for taking action quickly. Article is now GA. MWright96 (talk) 14:12, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
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