Talk:Condemnations of 1210–1277/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Pyrotec (talk) 20:36, 2 November 2009 (UTC)

Starting review. Pyrotec (talk) 20:36, 2 November 2009 (UTC)

Initial comments[edit]

After a quick read-through this article appears to be at or about GA-level. I will now do a more detailed review. Pyrotec (talk) 20:56, 2 November 2009 (UTC)

  • Condemnation of 1270 -
  • I assume that there is a typo in the statement:- "However, it seems "inconceivable" that any teacher would present deny God's Providence or present the Aristotelian "Unmoved Mover" as the true God.[8]". I assume that it should read - "However, it seems "inconceivable" that any teacher would present deny God's Providence or present the Aristotelian "Unmoved Mover" as the true God.[8]"?
    • Effects -
  • This:- "(Ironically, the concept of vacuum energy in quantum mechanics now shows that empty space, devoid of both matter and energy, is not possible.)" appears to be, possibly, a point of view or original research. Can be it be validated by means of a citation?

Overall summary[edit]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


A readable, well-referenced, well-illustrated article.

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    Well-referenced.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    Well-referenced.
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    Well-illustrated.
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    Well-illustrated.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

I have left two (unanswered) comments above. Other than resolving these two minor points, I consider that the article is fully compliant with the requirements of a GA. I'm therefore awarding GA status. Congratulations on the quality of the article. Pyrotec (talk) 21:59, 2 November 2009 (UTC)