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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 20:17, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Picking up this one. Review to follow. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:17, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Article looks good. It's actually a biographical article about the person rather than the court martial.

Comments:

As an aside, it is almost impossible to defend "conduct unbecoming", as the final clause is just "other than the above". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:50, 29 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, thanks. Very helpful review and comments. I learned a lot. I agreed with all your suggestions and made the appropriate changes. One exception, I couldn't find a link to Vietnam? There is one to North Vietnam which I thought should remain.JohnKent (talk) 00:23, 30 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I've made the change for you. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:04, 30 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    Looks good. Passing.
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