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Advisories Fiji

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  1. Jan 26 0300
  2. Jan 26 0900
  3. Jan 26 1200
  4. Jan 26 1800
  5. Gale Warning (Jan 27 0000)
  6. Jan 27 0300
  7. Gale Warning (Jan 27 0600)
  8. Gale Warning (Jan 27 1200)
  9. Jan 27 1500
  10. Gale Warning (Jan 27 1800)
  11. Jan 27 1800
  12. Gale Warning (Jan 28 0000)
  13. Gale Warning (Jan 28 0600)
  14. Jan 28 0600
  15. Gale Warning (Jan 28 1200)
  16. Jan 28 1200
  17. Gale Warning (Jan 28 1800)
  18. Jan 28 1800
  19. Gale Warning (Jan 29 0000)
  20. Jan 29 0000
  21. Gale Warning (Jan 29 0600)
  22. Jan 29 0600
  23. Jan 29 1200

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Cyclone Cilla/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 22:31, 30 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello YE, I will be reviewing this article today. Here are the issues I had with the article.

  • "After slightly weakening, Cilla briefly re-intensified the next." - Missing some word(s) here? Maybe "the next day."?
  • "However, Cilla transitioned into an extratropical cyclone on January 30." - Extratropical transition redirects to extratropical cyclone. So why link to the same article twice?
  • "Damage in Tonga was mostly limited to vegetation and fruit trees; infrastructural damage remained relatively minor." - I don't think "remained" is such a good word choice here. Maybe you could say, "; infrastructural damage was also relatively minor."?
  • "Cilla also brought moderate rain to American Samoa." - Wikilink "American Samoa"
  • "organization due to increased wind shear/[7]" - Well, that's an interesting way to end a sentence :P
  • "On January 29, thunderstorm activity once again increased in converge around the center" - Did you mean "coverage" or "convergence"?
  • "on January 29, Cilla was reduced to tropical depression" - There is a word missing here
  • "Damage in Tonga was mostly limited to vegetation and coconut and banana tress;[11]" - Just curious, what is a "banana tress"? :P
  • "Pagett, Gary. "January 2003". Monthly Global Tropical Cyclone Summary" - The last name "Padgett" is misspelled
  • David Longshore's "Encyclopedia of Hurricanes, Typhoons, and Cyclones" is considered a questionable source and may not be reliable. Considering it is only used once in this article and for a broad statement (i.e. does not cite a number of deaths or houses damage/destroyed, etc.), it should be very easy to find a more reliable source. Perhaps you can find another source in Cyclone Ami's article?
  • Alright, since you fixed these issues and some others which I didn't notice at first, I am going to pass with article.--12george1 (talk) 23:32, 30 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]