Talk:Danny McKnight/Archive 1

14 December 2006 cleanup

I just went through and did big clean up and cited references. I added more biographical information in order to better flesh out the article and assert notability. It had previously been tagged for notability, cleanup and wification. It looks notable and thoroughly wikified to me now. It could stand some more work, but virtually all of them can. I'll be keeping tabs on the article and will keep adding to the article and cleaning it up, but I think the bulk of the work in getting it good to go is complete, so I've removed the work tags and am now classifying it a start-class article. EvilCouch 09:26, 14 December 2006 (UTC)

Someone should try to verify dates in this article - Was McKnight really born in 1959? According to the article, he was a distinguished ROTC grad when he was fourteen years old. Does not compute.

McKnight was born in 1951, according to his resume. I fixed the dates as well as other erroneous information. I also revised the section on Mogadishu, which seemed to be a partially remembered description of the movie "Black Hawk Down" rather than a description of McKnight and his role in the battle. Airbornelawyer 19:00, 18 August 2007 (UTC)