Talk:Die Hard/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts 00:17, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll snag this one. Big fan of the movie, and I am actually surprised it isn't GA already. Rusted AutoParts 00:17, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I feel most of these will generally be minor nitpicks that can either be implemented or not, it wouldn't truly affect the page much. Rusted AutoParts 00:42, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Lead is concise, touches on just about every aspect of the article.

Plot

Plot meets WP:FILMPLOT standards.

Cast

"Robert Davi and Grand L. Bush appear as FBI Special Agent Big Johnson and Agent Little Johnson, respectively" would making the first Agent "Agents and deleting the second Agent work better? "Robert Davi and Grand L. Bush appear as FBI Special Agents Big Johnson and Little Johnson, respectively"

Casting "The role was also offered to, and declined by" not sure if the declined by is truly needed. It would be inherently implied they wouldn't accept the offer. "McTiernan's then-girlfriend happened to be sat next to a representative of CinemaScore on a plane" -> "McTiernan's then-girlfriend happened to be sat next to a representative of CinemaScore during a flight".

Filming "In contrast to their on-screen relationship, Bedelia and Rickman spent most of their time between scenes together. Veljohnson similarly spent much of his free time with Rickman" perhaps these two sentences can be merged into something like "In contrast to their on-screen dynamics, Bedelia and Veljohnson spent most of their time between scenes with Rickman".

I really can't see any other issues with the page outside of these. Tackle these, and that should do it. Rusted AutoParts 00:42, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done, thanks RA. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 09:40, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

And that is a ✓ Pass. Great work. Rusted AutoParts 15:16, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]