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Someone seems touchy about revisions here, so I'll leave a suggestion. The introductory sentence is a run-on sentence, which may be acceptible in music fan magazines, but won't fly here. Please correct, or I will be bold to use my Yank vernacular here. Be warned. (My new phone offers no "tildes" on the virtual keyboard, so I will have to sign the old-fashioned way.) The Ragityman, 20:05, 21June2019.