Talk:Dougherty Valley High School/GA1
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Hi, great article! This is probably the best article I've reviewed so far. I'm just going to work on a few minor changes and possibly bring up a few things to fix, but I'll be ready to pass very soon. --Edge3 (talk) 23:07, 1 September 2009 (UTC)
- "Dougherty is known for its state-of-the-art campus..." and "As a young school, Dougherty has established itself as a strong academic performer and as a developing athletic force." - Tone down the praise a little bit and replace the statements with factual info. See WP:PRESTIGE --Edge3 (talk) 00:36, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
- I've added a little to the facilities section about how the campus is considered to be state-of-the-art, which it is. I reworded the academic bit into the purely factual "Dougherty is the top school in the district based on Academic Performance Index". However, I kept the line about it being a "developing athletic force", because I think that this only indicates that the school is working on pushing its athletics program, which is to be expected for a young school. Additionally, this information is backed up by quotes from school officials in the main text. --Brandt Luke Zorn (talk) 04:17, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
- Ok that's fine. I'm passing the article.--Edge3 (talk) 00:50, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
- I've added a little to the facilities section about how the campus is considered to be state-of-the-art, which it is. I reworded the academic bit into the purely factual "Dougherty is the top school in the district based on Academic Performance Index". However, I kept the line about it being a "developing athletic force", because I think that this only indicates that the school is working on pushing its athletics program, which is to be expected for a young school. Additionally, this information is backed up by quotes from school officials in the main text. --Brandt Luke Zorn (talk) 04:17, 3 September 2009 (UTC)