Talk:Dragon Quest X/GA1
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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 01:14, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
And then there were two... Cognissonance (talk) 01:14, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
Synopsis
[edit]"the protagonist forges a friendship bond" — Improve prose: "the protagonist forges a friendship".
Development
[edit]I suggest illustrating the return of veteran developers, using images of art designer Akira Toriyama and composer Koichi Sugiyama. Another image depicting the Squenix game engine could also be useful.CGI — Link to Computer-generated imagery"¥1200 and ¥2000, then set it at ¥1000" — Parenthesize the $ equivalent for each.
Overall
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall: You have made a near flawless article. Congrats! You're my first immediate pass.
- Pass/Fail:
- @ProtoDrake: And you always remember your first... Cognissonance (talk) 04:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: