Talk:Drishyam/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:33, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

As requested... JAGUAR  22:33, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

• "the son of the Inspector-general of police (IG)" - '(IG)' isn't used again in the article's body, so I would recommend getting rid of it here. I don't think 'Inspector' needs to be capitalised here

 Done

• "with critics praising the screenplay, the performances and the direction" - would sound better if you lost the two "the's"

 Done

• "It ran for more than 150 days in theaters" - theatres (Indian English)

 Done

• "is the son of police inspector general" - 'inspector-general' had a hyphen in the lead, should one be here too?

 Done

• "In July 2013, it was reported that Jeethu Joseph will be directing a film titled My Family" - would be is past tense, so it should be used here

 Done

• "A thread similar to that of Drishyam has been with the director since the early nineties" - 1990s

 Done

• "Drishyam is completely different from the director's previous films" - a tad informal. How about Drishyam contrasts from the director's previous films.

 Done

• "The film was criticized for the use of some" - criticised

 Done

• "Sowmya Rajendran of Sify, criticized the same" - no need for the comma here, and should be criticised once again

 Done

• "It had its global television premiere on 7 September 2014 at 6 p.m." - no need for initials here

 Done

• No dead links

I'll leave this on hold until all of the above are clarified. Overall, it's a solid article JAGUAR  17:01, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for addressing them so quickly. I've looked over the article again and am confident that this now complies per the GA criteria. Well done! JAGUAR  17:21, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

Thanks very much JAGUAR, This is the first malayalam film after 2000s to become a GA. JØ +TALK 17:27, 25 February 2016 (UTC)