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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:23, 10 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]


I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 22:23, 10 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

References and image look good, though the lead does need to be expanded. Will do prose review tomorrow. Wizardman 02:20, 11 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Here's the rest of what I found:

  • "as a sophomore. Peer also served as art editor for the Quarterly, the college's literary magazine, in her sophomore year. Also in her sophomore year " That many sophomore years in one close batch starts to feel a bit redundant. Not a huge issue but I'd tweak the wording to keep it fresh.
  • I would think there should be a page number for the last reference, but I don't remember if Questia has that easily accessible or not.

A very well-written article overall, only had those couple tiny things; article on hold. Wizardman 02:54, 21 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]